<html><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">Jonathan, Lise:<br><br>Thankyou for another draft magnum opus. As you say there are several aspects to be completed in greater detail.<br><br>Meanwhile, may I point out that under:<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>I.<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span><b>The Community’s Use of the IANA</b><div><br>- and indeed in the whole document, there is no reference to the TLDs: .gov, .mil, .edu and .arpa.<br>These are not gTLDs, as the reference to .int confirms. For the sake of completeness, it would not be appropriate to ignore them.</div><div><br></div><div>Regards</div><div><br></div><div>CW</div><div><br></div><div><br><br><br><br></div><br><blockquote type="cite"><br>From: Jonathan Robinson <<a href="mailto:jrobinson@afilias.info">jrobinson@afilias.info</a>><br>Organization: Afilias<br>Reply-To: Jonathan Robinson <jrobinson@afilias.info><br>Date: Wednesday 25 February 2015 21:47<br>To: "cwg-stewardship@icann.org" <cwg-stewardship@icann.org><br>Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Draft Proposal Version 2.0<br><br>All,<br> <br>As discussed, on a few occasions recently, a new base version of a draft proposal – V2.0 - has been prepared.<br> <br>The attached draft is a starting point and intended to be dynamic and evolving in a form that is:<br>a. consistent with the ICG RFP<br>b. able to be cross-referenced with the already submitted proposals<br> <br>Overall, the primary purpose of this V2.0 draft is to provide a basis from which to map and manage our future work, including providing anchor points for both commissioning and absorbing the work of the Design Teams.<br> <br>We hope it will also be a beneficial reference for those who are observing or tracking the work of the group<br> <br>Note that this draft doesn’t include all of the work of the RFP III & RFP IV sub-groups. To the extent that their prior work is not included in the document, the work of these sub-groups should be seen to be valuable reference material and/or a basis for any relevant design teams.<br> <br>We trust this will be seen as a useful addition to the work of the group and we look forward to working with you to further develop this document.<br> <br>Thank-you,<br> <br> <br>Lise & Jonathan<br> <br> <br><span><CWG - Draft Transition Plan V2.0 updated.docx></span>_______________________________________________<br>CWG-Stewardship mailing list<br>CWG-Stewardship@icann.org<br>https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cwg-stewardship<br></blockquote><br></body></html>