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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thanks Avri,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I’m not sure I really understand what ICANN accountability would mean in this footnote. Surely the important thing would be to define the rules for the various structures we put in place to avoid unintended
consequences of one or more stakeholders being able to control outcomes? And then the rules might be different depending on the nature of the committee/group/process/whatever. Does that make sense?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I do note that my e-mail last night (I blame it on the late hour) I put 5.iv as a “second reading” (ie for clearing previously agreed text). Of course this is relatively new text and so should be done as a separate
point – perhaps along with 5.iii where there is a proposal for a change. Sorry for this.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Best<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Martin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext"> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Avri Doria<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 05 March 2015 07:11<br>
<b>To:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Principles and Criteria that Should Underpin Decisions on the Transition of NTIA Stewardship: New Draft<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi,<br>
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One small comment:<br>
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<p class="sdfootnote">would be required to achieve consensus. <o:p></o:p></p>
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Since consensus is such a loose term, might be good to specify 'ICANN Consensus', which is process dependent and is not full consensus, as opposed to just consensus.<br>
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thanks<br>
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avri<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 04-Mar-15 23:58, Martin Boyle wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi all,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">And special thanks to Elise and Paul for their cooperation on g.ii (now 7.ii), Stephanie for some useful proposed wording for j (now 10), Maarten Simon for some comments and suggested edits and Erick for some interesting discussion on h.ii
(now 8.ii).<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The result is perhaps a slightly more complicated document that it was on Tuesday evening!
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I propose that we look to: <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]>Remove all the comments and accept all the editing that has not had any comment that is the side heading and paragraphs (using the new numbering) 2, 3, 5.i, 5.iv, 6.ii, 7 chapeau, 7.iii-vi, 8.i, 8.iii and 9.<o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]>See whether the suggested compromise on 7.ii is acceptable.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]>See whether the proposed text in 5.iii is acceptable.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]>In the light of Maarten’s comment on 5.vi, check whether maintaining the current text (including removing the square brackets) is acceptable.<o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]>See whether 6.iii should be retained and whether there is consensus to remove the square brackets.<o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]>See if the edits proposed for 7.i are acceptable.<o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]>See if Stephanie’s proposal for 10 is acceptable.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">If we have time I’d like to at least ask Erick to introduce the alternative he has proposed for 8.ii. However, it is not proving to be an easy discussion so I propose to take this discussion off line as there is unlikely to be any resolution
in time for or during tomorrow’s call.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks and I look forward to a constructive discussion tomorrow.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Martin<o:p></o:p></p>
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