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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Works for me<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Martin Boyle<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, March 5, 2015 4:36 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Rinalia Abdul Rahim<br>
<b>Cc:</b> CWG Stewardship<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Principles and Criteria that Should Underpin Decisions on the Transition of NTIA Stewardship: New Draft<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Thanks Rinalia: yes, on re-reading I think that this does seem to have lost something in translation! I guess it is the process that needs to be
independent of the IANA functions operator, not the accountability itself. So if we said,
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="color:#1F497D;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">“<u>Independence of accountability</u>: accountability
</span><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:red">processes</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> should be independent of the IANA Functions Operator and should
assure the accountability of the Operator to the inclusive global multistakeholder community;”<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">would this work, or am I missing something else?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Best<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Martin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif"> Rinalia Abdul Rahim [<a href="mailto:rinalia.abdulrahim@gmail.com">mailto:rinalia.abdulrahim@gmail.com</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> 05 March 2015 03:19<br>
<b>To:</b> Martin Boyle<br>
<b>Cc:</b> CWG Stewardship<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Principles and Criteria that Should Underpin Decisions on the Transition of NTIA Stewardship: New Draft<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span lang="EN-GB">Hi.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-GB">I find 5.ii not easy to understand. Can the text be improved for clarity?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-GB">Thanks.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-GB">Rinalia<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">On Mar 5, 2015 7:59 AM, "Martin Boyle" <<a href="mailto:Martin.Boyle@nominet.org.uk">Martin.Boyle@nominet.org.uk</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB">Hi all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB">And special thanks to Elise and Paul for their cooperation on g.ii (now 7.ii), Stephanie for some useful proposed wording for j (now 10), Maarten Simon for some
comments and suggested edits and Erick for some interesting discussion on h.ii (now 8.ii).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB">The result is perhaps a slightly more complicated document that it was on Tuesday evening!
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB">I propose that we look to:
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:Symbol">·</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:7.0pt">
</span><span lang="EN-GB">Remove all the comments and accept all the editing that has not had any comment that is the side heading and paragraphs (using the new numbering) 2, 3, 5.i, 5.iv, 6.ii, 7 chapeau, 7.iii-vi, 8.i, 8.iii and 9.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:Symbol">·</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:7.0pt">
</span><span lang="EN-GB">See whether the suggested compromise on 7.ii is acceptable.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:Symbol">·</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:7.0pt">
</span><span lang="EN-GB">See whether the proposed text in 5.iii is acceptable.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span lang="EN-GB">In the light of Maarten’s comment on <a href="http://5.vi" target="_blank">
5.vi</a>, check whether maintaining the current text (including removing the square brackets) is acceptable.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:Symbol">·</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:7.0pt">
</span><span lang="EN-GB">See whether 6.iii should be retained and whether there is consensus to remove the square brackets.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:Symbol">·</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:7.0pt">
</span><span lang="EN-GB">See if the edits proposed for 7.i are acceptable.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:Symbol">·</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:7.0pt">
</span><span lang="EN-GB">See if Stephanie’s proposal for 10 is acceptable.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB">If we have time I’d like to at least ask Erick to introduce the alternative he has proposed for 8.ii. However, it is not proving to be an easy discussion so
I propose to take this discussion off line as there is unlikely to be any resolution in time for or during tomorrow’s call.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB">Thanks and I look forward to a constructive discussion tomorrow.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB">Martin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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