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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:#1F497D">Kurt &#8211; Why did you suggest the following language in h.iii: &#8220;</span>No additional requirements for prompt delivery of IANA services should be imposed unless they are directly and demonstrably
 linked to global security, stability and resilience of the DNS.<span style="color:#1F497D">&#8221;&nbsp; Shouldn&#8217;t that be considered by the applicable design team.&nbsp; For example, it might be helpful to consider an expedited procedure in certain cases where a TLD needs
 to be re-delegated to minimize the impact of downtime for registrants in the TLD.&nbsp; For this example, would that be a stability issue?&nbsp; If so, the language might be okay.&nbsp; Regardless, it seems to me that the design team should consider this before making it
 a principle.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:#1F497D">Chuck</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Maarten Simon<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, March 04, 2015 7:45 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> 'Martin Boyle'; cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Principles and Criteria that Should Underpin Decisions on the Transition of NTIA Stewardship: New Draft<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="NL" style="color:#1F497D">Hi Martin,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="NL" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Hereby a few comments/suggestions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Martin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Martin Boyle<br>
<b>Sent:</b> woensdag 4 maart 2015 12:44<br>
<b>To:</b> Duchesneau, Stephanie; <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Principles and Criteria that Should Underpin Decisions on the Transition of NTIA Stewardship: New Draft<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">Thanks Stephanie,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">This looks good to me in that I
<i>think</i> it reflects the original intention of the reference, but with clearer focus.&nbsp; I&#8217;d like to hear what others think.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">I&#8217;d appreciate any additional comments on the draft by 18.00 UTC so that I can circulate a new version for tomorrow&#8217;s call, when I also hope to have a compromise wording on section g.ii.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">(By the way:&nbsp; would anyone have any objections to me changing the paragraph style to number/letter or number/Roman numeral?&nbsp; Paragraphs marked i.i look rather odd as Olivier pointed out last night!)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">Cheers<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">Martin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> Duchesneau, Stephanie [<a href="mailto:Stephanie.Duchesneau@neustar.us">mailto:Stephanie.Duchesneau@neustar.us</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> 03 March 2015 19:15<br>
<b>To:</b> Martin Boyle; <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [CWG-Stewardship] Principles and Criteria that Should Underpin Decisions on the Transition of NTIA Stewardship: New Draft<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a name="OLE_LINK2"></a><a name="OLE_LINK1"></a>Hi Martin and all,<o:p></o:p></p>
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Here is my suggested language revision from today&#8217;s call.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Stephanie<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Martin Boyle<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, March 03, 2015 4:09 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] Principles and Criteria that Should Underpin Decisions on the Transition of NTIA Stewardship: New Draft<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Colleagues,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">My apologies, but following the Christmas break I failed to progress this discussion.&nbsp;
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">I now attach a revised draft, still with a major outstanding issue in g. (page 2).&nbsp;
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">There are two variants for g.ii.&nbsp; One simply reduces the previous paragraph to read &#8220;For ccTLDs, respect national sovereignty;&#8221; at the request of the GAC.&nbsp; The other is more closely based on, but shortens, the previous
 text:&nbsp; &#8220;For ccTLDs, policy decisions may be made locally through nationally agreed processes in accordance with national laws and in compliance with IETF technical standards. &nbsp;Post transition of the IANA function nothing will be done by ICANN/IANA to impact
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">The draft contains a number of marked up edits from previous discussions that seem to have general agreement.&nbsp; For the text redlines:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">1.<span style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">I have deleted the section heading &#8220;Introduction&#8221;:&nbsp; there are no other section headings, so this appears to be superfluous.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Principles b. and c. (previously sub-clauses to the heading on security, stability and resilience) are now stand-alone at the request of the GAC.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Accountability &amp; transparency (e.):<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Paragraph i:&nbsp; two edits that appear to have general agreement.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Paragraph ii:&nbsp; a new edit to correct the text.&nbsp; The new version amends the text to reflect the sub-heading.&nbsp; The old version put it the other way around.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Paragraph iv:&nbsp; Footnote on capture added as requested courtesy of Alan Greenberg &amp; Milton Mueller.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Paragraph vi:&nbsp; While I think we all agree on the need for some form of appeals process, there is still some debate as to where that should lie.&nbsp; So for example, the appeals process might well not be designed
 by the CWG and might be the responsibility of the CCWG.&nbsp; For ccTLDs, it might mean that a third party might have a say over a national decision on a ccTLD.&nbsp; I flag this in case further thought is needed in the light of discussion over the last few days.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Service levels (f.):<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-GB"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">a.<span style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Paragraph ii:&nbsp; I think the majority view is that automation should only be for routine functions (and not for controversial or subjective decisions such as on redelegations).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Paragraph iii:&nbsp; Previously a stand-alone point.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Policy based (g):&nbsp; other than some minor editing, there are two alternatives for g.ii. as noted above.&nbsp; I would note that there was no support in our last discussion to retain g.vi. (require bottom-up modalities)
 as this is treated elsewhere (in particular in the chapeau text to g.).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Diversity of customers (h.):&nbsp; some (I hope) minor and uncontroversial edits in the chapeau and in i. and ii.&nbsp; The text in paragraph iii was generally agreed.
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Separability:&nbsp; modifications to i.i. and i.iii generally agreed in the last discussion.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB">Multi-stakeholder principle paragraph j:&nbsp; generally agreed in the last discussion subject to concerns about wording (the previous text appeared to recommend direct involvement in the management of the IANA function).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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