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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I have no objection to doing this – the wording is fine for me. The first use of the term is in 5.ii, so I will add the footnote there for the next revision:
I’d suggest, “The term IANA functions operator refers to the entity organisational structure that provides the service. It is independent of the organisation that hosts the operator, currently ICANN.”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">But I’m more than happy to hear alternatives.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> john@expri.com [mailto:john@expri.com]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>John Poole<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 09 March 2015 22:51<br>
<b>To:</b> Milton L Mueller<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Martin Boyle; cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Principles: revised draft 9 March<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Milton,<br>
Your definition is fine so long as that is specific definition is added to the document (even as a footnote). The term is widely used to refer to ICANN generally, in NTIA, ICANN, and other documents, and I do not want confusion in the future, either by the
CWG or others who may later read this.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Mon, Mar 9, 2015 at 4:29 PM, Milton L Mueller <<a href="mailto:mueller@syr.edu" target="_blank">mueller@syr.edu</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I thought we had agreed long ago that all references to the IANA functions operator
were to the IANA functions operator per se, and not to ICANN, because it cannot and should not be assumed that ICANN will always be the IANA functions operator.
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<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>John Poole<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, March 9, 2015 4:30 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Martin Boyle<br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org" target="_blank">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Principles: revised draft 9 March</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US">I know this has been raised before but I am still unsure of your terminology--please define "IANA Functions Operator" which appears multiple times in various
contexts in the draft of Principles. Are you referring only to the IANA department within ICANN, or are you referring to ICANN? ICANN is referred to generally as the<a href="https://www.google.com/search?q=IANA+functions+operator" target="_blank"> "IANA Functions
Operator" in NTIA and ICANN and other documents</a>. The draft Principles seem to use the term in places as referring to ICANN and other places as referring only to the IANA department within ICANN--<i>e.g.</i>, in 5 iii: "... policy processes should be independent
of the IANA Functions Operator ..."<i> i.e.,</i> policy processes should be independent of ICANN? Then who is making policy? Could you please clarify?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">I attach a revised draft of the principles document based on our calls on 3 & 5 March. I believe we have a text that is pretty much in its final form, with only one outstanding
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Looking at the remaining highlighted changes:<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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5.ii & iii: These are mainly editorial and have been discussed without opposition on recent calls.
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5.iv footnote: We had comments about the meaning of consensus in the footnote. I do not think that defining consensus is in the remit of this document, but is part of the considerations of any entity that we establish. Hence I have added, “Conditions for
consensus will need to be agreed appropriate for the group” to make this clear.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<a href="http://5.vi" target="_blank">5.vi</a>: As I said when I flagged this paragraph as of concern, I am inherently uneasy about a principle that is essentially optional and where it might need to be re-written because of subsequent choices that we make.
Either it is a principle or it isn’t. I believe that we need to understand the implications of what we are trying to say, so I am taking editor’s right to propose a new formulation that should be independent of subsequent decisions.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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6.ii: Was agreed as not being a principle last week.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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7.i: Editing agreed last week.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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7.ii: We took this off-line. There has been some progress in discussions with Paul and Elise. I have made a drafting proposal to both for wording that tries to take into account the concerns they have expressed. However, this paragraph needs to be held
in abeyance until we have heard the views of both.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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8.ii: In discussion with Erick, we have identified a compromise that moves away from saying anything about the policy authority and who it might or might not be. The proposed wording (“In particular, the IANA functions operator should not impose any additional
requirements on the registry unless they are directly and demonstrably linked to global security, stability and resilience of the DNS.”) turns this around to prevent the IANA functions operator making unilateral decisions that impact the ccTLD except in (rare)
cases of global security, stability and resilience. <b>Given the delicate balance behind this text, I hope that others will find this formulation acceptable</b> and I thank Erick for his support in finding this compromise.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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9.i: A minor point here that was discussed last week. The wording is not necessary to the text, but does make it clearer that i. is about separability now and iii. says we would need to include separability for all future IANA functions operators.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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10: A reasonable edit proposed by Mary last week: no objections have been raised.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Hence I would hold 5.ii-iv, 6.ii, 7.i, 9.i and 10 to be agreed text if there are no objections.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">5.iv: I suggest we use the new wording unless there is significant opposition.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">7.ii: This has to stay in abeyance subject to agreement by Elise (in discussion with the GAC) and by Paul Kane.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">8.ii: Again I suggest we use the proposed wording unless there is significant opposition.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">I look forward to comments on this approach, and please do flag early any difficulties you might have with any of the proposals.<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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