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<div>Hi Chuck,</div>
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<div>Thanks for your feedback. For now the focus has been on identifying the issues that need to be dealt with – I don’t think the structure of section III is set in stone, so if the view is that the issues identified and being worked on by DT fit better under
a different heading, I don’t think that should be an issue. Just my two cents.</div>
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<div>Best regards,</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span><Gomes>, Chuck Gomes <<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com">cgomes@verisign.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Wednesday 11 March 2015 20:58<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Marika Konings <<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org">marika.konings@icann.org</a>>, "<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>RE: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - Draft Transition Plan V2.1 and DT Status Overview<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">It may be just me or it may because I was mostly out of the loop for a week and a half, but in Section III.A.1 of plan the placement of some of the
DT output seems strange to me. For example:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">It makes perfect sense to me why DT-L (</span><b><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">IANA
Function Separation Mechanism</span></b><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">) would be in Section III.A.1.1 (</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt">Contract extension, cancellation and renewal</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">)
but I don’t understand why DT-M (Escalation Procedures) would be in the same section; Wouldn’t DT-M be better placed in ‘</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt">III.A.1.3 Administration/oversight of SOW</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">’
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</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Also, why would DT-B (</span><b><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Cambria, serif;">Assessment of the Level of Consensus within
the ccTLD Community in Regard to a Possible Appeal Mechanism for ccTLD Delegations and Redelegations</span></b><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">) be in ‘Section III.A.1.1 (</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt">Contract
extension, cancellation and renewal</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">)’; in my opinion it would also be better placed in ‘</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt">III.A.1.3 Administration/oversight
of SOW</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">’ or ‘</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt">III.A.1.4 Statement of Work (SOW)</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">’.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Am I missing something here?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">
<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Marika Konings<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, March 11, 2015 3:08 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - Draft Transition Plan V2.1 and DT Status Overview<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">As discussed during yesterday’s meeting, please find attached version 2.1 of the draft transition proposal which includes:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">References in section 3 to Design Teams</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">New section covering .INT</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Placeholders in section 3 where staff is developing text for CWG review</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Some minor other edits</span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Please share any comments / edits you may have with the list. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">For your convenience, you will also find the latest version of the design teams status overview which includes some of the improvements discussed during yesterday’s meeting.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Best regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Marika</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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