<p dir="ltr">Hi Greg,</p>
<p dir="ltr">Olive office on my android handled is obviously not displaying the footnote referred. In anycase I am still fine with what you have noted so long as 9i wordings is maintained as it currently is.</p>
<p dir="ltr">Regards</p>
<p dir="ltr">sent from Google nexus 4<br>
kindly excuse brevity and typos.</p>
<div class="gmail_quote">On 6 Apr 2015 19:52, "Greg Shatan" <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br type="attribution"><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">All.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I have read this draft and I have no objections. I have made a few non-substantive "clean-up" changes in the attached draft, picking up Eduardo's comments (though I did not find the "tabs" to be an issue), adding a couple of headings where the format of the document dictates it, making some very minor clarifying changes in the newly-revised title and intro paragraph, and fixing some typos.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">In response to Seun's comment, I note that footnote 1 defines the IANA functions operator as "<span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:11pt;line-height:115%">the unit that
provides the service."</span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:11pt;line-height:115%"><br></span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:11pt;line-height:115%">With these changes, I find the document acceptable.</span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:11pt;line-height:115%"><br></span></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:11pt;line-height:115%">Greg Shatan</span></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Apr 6, 2015 at 1:59 PM, Andrew Sullivan <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:ajs@anvilwalrusden.com" target="_blank">ajs@anvilwalrusden.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Dear colleagues,<br>
<br>
I've read this draft of the principles, and I think it should be<br>
accepted this way.<br>
<br>
Best regards,<br>
<br>
A<br>
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On Thu, Apr 02, 2015 at 06:50:09PM +0200, Lise Fuhr wrote:<br>
> Dear All,<br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
> As announced at the CWG conference call today, the latest draft of the<br>
> Principles is hereby sent to the list. Please be aware that there is a<br>
> deadline for the conclusion of the Principles on Friday 10th of April, and<br>
> we have had several iterations on the document.<br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
> As Martin Boyle mentioned in his email of March 24th , this is a compromise<br>
> among many parties, so please have this in mind when reading.<br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
> I resend the redlined version with comments and a clean version. If no<br>
> objections are posted online by Friday April 10th , 12:00 UTC, the<br>
> Principles will be considered as finalized and agreed upon by the CWG.<br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
> Best regards,<br>
><br>
> Lise<br>
><br>
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