<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><base href="x-msg://20/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">+1 CW<div><br><div><div>On 08 Apr 2015, at 15:48, "Lindeberg, Elise" <<a href="mailto:elise.lindeberg@Nkom.no">elise.lindeberg@Nkom.no</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div lang="NO-BOK" link="blue" vlink="purple" style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: medium; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: -webkit-auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; "><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; "><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Lise, all<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">I have only one comment to the latest draft of the principles - It`s related to the suggested text/changes in the introduction.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><i><span lang="EN-US">The principles contained within this document<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><u>are intended to provide guidance</u><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>to members of the CWG in their work in formulating proposal(s) for stable transition of oversight for the IANA names functions in the IANA functions contract from the NTIA.<o:p></o:p></span></i></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><i><span lang="EN-US"> </span></i></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">I find the first line in this text weaker and unclear in comparison to the original one:<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">These principles and Criteria are<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><u>meant to be the basis</u><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>on which the decisions on the transition of NTIA Stewardship are formed. <o:p></o:p></span></i></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> </span></i></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">The introduction explaining how the principles are meant to be used in the CWG work is important for our involvement in these principles and the outreach that has been done to GAC and other communities to get them to comment on them. I find it very strange to change the basics at the latest stage in finishing - so I don’t agree in this proposed change.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Elise</span><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p></o:p></span></i></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US"> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; ">Fra:</span></b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; "><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>[mailto:cwg-<a href="mailto:stewardship-bounces@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a>]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><b>På vegne av</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Seun Ojedeji<br><b>Sendt:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>6. april 2015 22:28<br><b>Til:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Greg Shatan<br><b>Kopi:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br><b>Emne:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Final Draft of Principles<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><p style="margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">Hi Greg,<o:p></o:p></p><p style="margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">Olive office on my android handled is obviously not displaying the footnote referred. In anycase I am still fine with what you have noted so long as 9i wordings is maintained as it currently is.<o:p></o:p></p><p style="margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">Regards<o:p></o:p></p><p style="margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">sent from Google nexus 4<br>kindly excuse brevity and typos.<o:p></o:p></p><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">On 6 Apr 2015 19:52, "Greg Shatan" <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></div><div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; ">All.<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; "> </span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; ">I have read this draft and I have no objections. I have made a few non-substantive "clean-up" changes in the attached draft, picking up Eduardo's comments (though I did not find the "tabs" to be an issue), adding a couple of headings where the format of the document dictates it, making some very minor clarifying changes in the newly-revised title and intro paragraph, and fixing some typos.<o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; "> </span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; ">In response to Seun's comment, I note that footnote 1 defines the IANA functions operator as "</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">the unit that provides the service."</span><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; "><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; "> </span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">With these changes, I find the document acceptable.</span><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; "><o:p></o:p></span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; "> </span></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Greg Shatan</span><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; "><o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">On Mon, Apr 6, 2015 at 1:59 PM, Andrew Sullivan <<a href="mailto:ajs@anvilwalrusden.com" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">ajs@anvilwalrusden.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">Dear colleagues,<br><br>I've read this draft of the principles, and I think it should be<br>accepted this way.<br><br>Best regards,<br><br>A<o:p></o:p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 12pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><br>On Thu, Apr 02, 2015 at 06:50:09PM +0200, Lise Fuhr wrote:<br>> Dear All,<br>><br>><br>><br>> As announced at the CWG conference call today, the latest draft of the<br>> Principles is hereby sent to the list. Please be aware that there is a<br>> deadline for the conclusion of the Principles on Friday 10th of April, and<br>> we have had several iterations on the document.<br>><br>><br>><br>> As Martin Boyle mentioned in his email of March 24th , this is a compromise<br>> among many parties, so please have this in mind when reading.<br>><br>><br>><br>> I resend the redlined version with comments and a clean version. If no<br>> objections are posted online by Friday April 10th , 12:00 UTC, the<br>> Principles will be considered as finalized and agreed upon by the CWG.<br>><br>><br>><br>> Best regards,<br>><br>> Lise<br>><br><br><br><o:p></o:p></p></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">> _______________________________________________<br>> CWG-Stewardship mailing list<br>><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:CWG-Stewardship@icann.org" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">CWG-Stewardship@icann.org</a><br>><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cwg-stewardship" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cwg-stewardship</a><br><br><br><span style="color: rgb(136, 136, 136); ">--<br>Andrew Sullivan<br><a href="mailto:ajs@anvilwalrusden.com" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">ajs@anvilwalrusden.com</a></span><o:p></o:p></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">_______________________________________________<br>CWG-Stewardship mailing list<br><a href="mailto:CWG-Stewardship@icann.org" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">CWG-Stewardship@icann.org</a><br><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cwg-stewardship" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cwg-stewardship</a><o:p></o:p></div></div></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><br><br clear="all"><o:p></o:p></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">--<o:p></o:p></div><div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; line-height: 12pt; "><b><span style="font-size: 9pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: rgb(23, 54, 93); ">Gregory S. 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