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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I agree with Elise on this<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Lindeberg, Elise<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, April 8, 2015 9:49 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> lisefuhrforwader; Martin.Boyle@nominet.org.uk<br>
<b>Cc:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Final Draft of Principles<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="NO-BOK" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Lise, all
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I have only one comment to the latest draft of the principles - It`s related to the suggested text/changes in the introduction.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><i>The principles contained within this document <u>are intended to provide guidance</u> to members of the CWG in their work in formulating proposal(s) for stable transition of oversight for the IANA names functions in the IANA functions
contract from the NTIA. <o:p></o:p></i></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I find the first line in this text weaker and unclear in comparison to the original one:
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<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">These principles and Criteria are
<u>meant to be the basis</u> on which the decisions on the transition of NTIA Stewardship are formed. <o:p></o:p></span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">The introduction explaining how the principles are meant to be used in the CWG work is important for our involvement in these principles and the outreach that
has been done to GAC and other communities to get them to comment on them. I find it very strange to change the basics at the latest stage in finishing - so I don’t agree in this proposed change.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Elise</span><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></i></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="NO-BOK" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">Fra:</span></b><span lang="NO-BOK" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">
<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>På vegne av</b> Seun Ojedeji<br>
<b>Sendt:</b> 6. april 2015 22:28<br>
<b>Til:</b> Greg Shatan<br>
<b>Kopi:</b> <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Emne:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Final Draft of Principles<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span lang="NO-BOK">Hi Greg,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="NO-BOK">Olive office on my android handled is obviously not displaying the footnote referred. In anycase I am still fine with what you have noted so long as 9i wordings is maintained as it currently is.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="NO-BOK">Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="NO-BOK">sent from Google nexus 4<br>
kindly excuse brevity and typos.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="NO-BOK">On 6 Apr 2015 19:52, "Greg Shatan" <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="NO-BOK" style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">I have read this draft and I have no objections. I have made a few non-substantive "clean-up" changes in the attached draft, picking up Eduardo's comments (though I did not find
the "tabs" to be an issue), adding a couple of headings where the format of the document dictates it, making some very minor clarifying changes in the newly-revised title and intro paragraph, and fixing some typos.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="NO-BOK" style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">In response to Seun's comment, I note that footnote 1 defines the IANA functions operator as "</span><span lang="NO-BOK" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">the
unit that provides the service."</span><span lang="NO-BOK" style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="NO-BOK" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">With these changes, I find the document acceptable.</span><span lang="NO-BOK" style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="NO-BOK" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Greg Shatan</span><span lang="NO-BOK" style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="NO-BOK">On Mon, Apr 6, 2015 at 1:59 PM, Andrew Sullivan <<a href="mailto:ajs@anvilwalrusden.com" target="_blank">ajs@anvilwalrusden.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="NO-BOK">Dear colleagues,<br>
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I've read this draft of the principles, and I think it should be<br>
accepted this way.<br>
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Best regards,<br>
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A<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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On Thu, Apr 02, 2015 at 06:50:09PM +0200, Lise Fuhr wrote:<br>
> Dear All,<br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
> As announced at the CWG conference call today, the latest draft of the<br>
> Principles is hereby sent to the list. Please be aware that there is a<br>
> deadline for the conclusion of the Principles on Friday 10th of April, and<br>
> we have had several iterations on the document.<br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
> As Martin Boyle mentioned in his email of March 24th , this is a compromise<br>
> among many parties, so please have this in mind when reading.<br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
> I resend the redlined version with comments and a clean version. If no<br>
> objections are posted online by Friday April 10th , 12:00 UTC, the<br>
> Principles will be considered as finalized and agreed upon by the CWG.<br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
> Best regards,<br>
><br>
> Lise<br>
><br>
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