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3 minutes late, but...<br><br>
Marika, <br><br>
Section 4 of the main body and Annex N is not correct. It should
be:<br><br>
Control of Root Zone Management<br><br>
Currently updating the Root Zone requires the active participation of
three parties, the IANA Functions Operator, the Root Zone Maintainer and
the NTIA. The IANA Functions Operator receives change requests from
various sources, validates them, and sends them to the Root Zone
Maintainer who, once they are authorized by the NTIA, updates the Root
Zone File, DNSSEC signs it, and distributes it to the Root
operators.<br><br>
Post transition there will only be the IANA Functions Operator and the
Root Zone Maintainer. The CWG is not recommending any change in the
separation between the two at this time. The CWG is recommending that
should there be a proposal to combine the two or make other changes in
their respective roles in root zone modification, that it be subject to
wide community consultation.<br><br>
Also, there still seems to be a duplicate in the ToC for this section
(once in upper case and once regular).<br><br>
Alan<br><br>
At 21/04/2015 03:57 PM, Marika Konings wrote:<br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">Dear All,<br><br>
<font face="Calibri">Please find attached version 3.4. of the proposal
which includes the edits and comments that have been received to date as
well as those discussed during today’s meeting. Note that Sharon had
committed to providing some suggestions for Section III as well as Annex
L. Also, DT A is working on placeholder language for the section on SLEs.
If there are any further comments and/or proposed edits or any that I’ve
missed, please share those with the mailing list at the latest
<b><u>today (Tuesday 21 April) by 23:59 UTC</u></b>. If you are using the
track changes approach, please use the clean version to make your
edits.<br>
</font><br>
Thanks,<br><br>
Marika<br>
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