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Hi,<br>
<br>
Marika, apologies for yet another edit. Do not know it it is too
late, but responding to the issues in the current draft.<br>
<br>
DT-N worked on both Annex F and Annex L trying to make them
consistent.<br>
<br>
- Worked of the escalation triggers.<br>
- CSC + a super-majority of ccNSO and GNSO can trigger the IFR<br>
- the IFRT can trigger (recommend) a Separation mechanism<br>
<br>
- made Annex F & L consistent & non overlapping on triggers<br>
<br>
- minor changes to short version (III.A.i.d & III.A.ii.d) for
consistency with annex F & L<br>
<br>
- put the decisions of the IFR back to Consensus or super-majority.
<br>
<br>
- removed IETF & RIRs from IFRT<br>
<br>
- move trigger to trigger section in F<br>
<br>
- changed duration of IFR to 9 months<br>
<br>
- fixed table to refer to IFR<br>
<br>
Made all the edits to the not-clean version. Hope that was the
right thing to do.<br>
<br>
<br>
Another note that was made to me in my constituency, will we have a
glossary of acronyms. <br>
We are very acronym rich.<br>
thanks<br>
<br>
avri<br>
<br>
<br>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 20-Apr-15 14:50, Marika Konings
wrote:<br>
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<div>Dear All,</div>
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<div>Please find attached an updated draft which now incorporates,
amongst others, a summary for section III, DT X, information
from the legal memo, updates as a result of comments received
and proposed text for section IIIB. Note that we’ve also
reorganised the annexes to match the flow of the document.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><u>Please note that that there a number of comments that have
been flagged that need further consideration by the different
DTs. We would like to encourage the leads of the DTs to pick
up on the items that have been flagged for review and provide
feedback on those items to the CWG mailing list as soon as
possible.</u></div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Also, note that we’ve incorporated those edits and/or
comments that we considered corrections and/or clarifications of
existing content as well as responses to some of the Sidley
comments. If you do not agree with those responses or updates or
are of the view that these are more than corrections and/or
clarifications, please flag those accordingly. </div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>You are encouraged to flag any items that you think warrant
CWG consideration by Tuesday 20 April at 16.00 UTC at the
latest. Other minor edits and/or clarifications can be submitted
until Tuesday 20 April 23.59 UTC.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>For your convenience I’ve attached a redline and clean
version both in Word as well as pdf.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Thanks again for all your feedback!</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Marika </div>
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