<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 13px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div>Milton,</div><div><br></div><div>I don't think these sorts of exaggerated statements are helpful.</div><div><br></div><div>Historically, in terms of workload and policy setting, IANA was "controlled" far more by the protocol parameter community than the names operational community (which is, of course, a subset of the ICANN community). And it is certainly not the case that the IANA functions were "operated" by the names operational community — IANA staff were not related to that community at all. I don't believe that has changed all that much since I ran the IANA functions.</div><div><br></div><div>Regards,</div><div>-drc</div><div><br></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"><div style="font-family:Calibri; font-size:11pt; text-align:left; color:black; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0in; PADDING-LEFT: 0in; PADDING-RIGHT: 0in; BORDER-TOP: #b5c4df 1pt solid; BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 3pt"><span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span> Milton L Mueller <<a href="mailto:mueller@syr.edu">mueller@syr.edu</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span> Tuesday, April 21, 2015 at 11:32 AM<br><span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span> 'Martin Boyle' <<a href="mailto:Martin.Boyle@nominet.org.uk">Martin.Boyle@nominet.org.uk</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span> CWG Mailing List <<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3<br></div><div><br></div><blockquote id="MAC_OUTLOOK_ATTRIBUTION_BLOCKQUOTE" style="BORDER-LEFT: #b5c4df 5 solid; PADDING:0 0 0 5; MARGIN:0 0 0 5;"><div xmlns:v="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:vml" xmlns:o="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m="http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/2004/12/omml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"><meta name="Generator" content="Microsoft Word 15 (filtered medium)"><style><!--
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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="WordSection1"><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Martin<o:p></o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">I also think Andrew’s clear distinction between IANA and names-related IANA functions was correct.
<o:p></o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Because IANA is currently controlled and operated by the names operational community (ICANN), there is no way for
a names proposal to _<i><span style="font-style:italic">not</span></i>_ touch on numbers or protocol parameters in some way. That is the “design flaw” that makes the names part of this hard. The legal separation makes this issue less of a problem but will
require some coordination and adjustment by the other OCs. But that is not a big deal; the numbers proposal already required some adjustment and coordination by the protocols community. There is no way to avoid these interdependencies. But adjustments to
facilitate compatibility are not the same as one OC telling another what to do. <o:p></o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">--MM<o:p></o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><div style="border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 4.0pt"><div><div style="border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in"><p class="MsoNormal"><b><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-weight: bold;">From:</span></font></b><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"> <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a>
[<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a>] <b><span style="font-weight:bold">On Behalf Of
</span></b>Martin Boyle<br><b><span style="font-weight:bold">Sent:</span></b> Tuesday, April 21, 2015 12:33 PM<br><b><span style="font-weight:bold">To:</span></b> Greg Shatan; Alissa Cooper<br><b><span style="font-weight:bold">Cc:</span></b> <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br><b><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject:</span></b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div></div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">I think that Greg is right, that we were not mandated in the CWG to look at numbers or protocol parameters.
While that might sit uneasily, I’m not sure I really know about the flow of funding or the accountability/stewardship role in the light of Milton’s assertion.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Specifically asking CRISP & IANAPLAN for views as to where they would see their relationship lying
(given the ring-fencing of the IANA functions operator into a subsidiary in ICANN) would seem to me to be appropriate. They could, after all, contract/sign an MoU with either ICANN or ICANN’s affiliate.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Martin<o:p></o:p></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><div style="border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in"><p class="MsoNormal"><b><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; font-weight: bold;">From:</span></font></b><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;"></span></font><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org"><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</span></font></a><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">
[</span></font><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org"><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</span></font></a><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">]
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">On Behalf Of </span></b>Greg Shatan<br><b><span style="font-weight:bold">Sent:</span></b> 21 April 2015 17:14<br><b><span style="font-weight:bold">To:</span></b> CW Lists<br><b><span style="font-weight:bold">Cc:</span></b> </span></font><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></font></a><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;"><br><b><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject:</span></b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;">I agree with Alissa that this needs to be clarified. Some of the lack of clarity is due to concern about having a proposal that
goes beyond naming functions. This has resulted in some odd phrasings and odd proposals.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;">In my view, splitting the IANA personnel and assets so this is a "names-only" proposal is unrealistic and unnecessary. Because we
are within ICANN, we have a different relationship to the IANA Functions group. We should make it clear that the whole ball of wax would move to PTI, and put that out for public comment. We should flag this specifically for the CRISP and IANAPLAN group.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;">Greg<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">On Tue, Apr 21, 2015 at 11:58 AM, Greg Shatan <</span><a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank"><span lang="EN-GB">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</span></a></font><span lang="EN-GB">>
wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;">In this instance, I agree with Christopher. I believe both statements are accurate (though the first is less than mellifluous in
its phrasing).<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="#888888" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; color: rgb(136, 136, 136);"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="#888888" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; color: rgb(136, 136, 136);">Greg Shatan<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div></div><div><div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">On Tue, Apr 21, 2015 at 11:36 AM, CW Lists <</span><a href="mailto:lists@christopherwilkinson.eu" target="_blank"><span lang="EN-GB">lists@christopherwilkinson.eu</span></a></font><span lang="EN-GB">>
wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">I prefer the existing text, unchanged.<font color="#888888"><span style="color:#888888"><o:p></o:p></span></font></span></font></p><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="#888888" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:#888888"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="#888888" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:#888888">CW<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="#888888" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:#888888"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><div><div><div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">On 21 Apr 2015, at 16:47, Brenden Kuerbis <</span><a href="mailto:bnkuerbi@syr.edu" target="_blank"><span lang="EN-GB">bnkuerbi@syr.edu</span></a></font><span lang="EN-GB">>
wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div></div><blockquote style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt"><div><div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">Hi Marika,<o:p></o:p></span></font></p><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">The first bullet in Section III.A says:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><blockquote style="border:none;border-left:solid #CCCCCC 1.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 6.0pt;margin-left:4.8pt;margin-top:5.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:5.0pt"><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">ICANN, through an affiliate controlled by ICANN, to continue as the IANA Functions Operator for the Naming Related Services through the creation of a separate
legal entity, Post-Transition IANA (PTI).<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></blockquote></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">Section III.A.i.a, which is text provided by Sidley in consultation with the CWG, says:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><blockquote style="border:none;border-left:solid #CCCCCC 1.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 6.0pt;margin-left:4.8pt;margin-top:5.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:5.0pt"><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">A contract would be entered between PTI and ICANN, which would give PTI the rights and obligations as the IANA Functions Operator. <o:p></o:p></span></font></p></blockquote><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">I believe the latter statement is correct, and the prior bullet is inconsistent with it (or at least very unclear). Perhaps Sidley could provide more accurate
text for the bullet in Section III.A, or I would suggest:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><blockquote style="border:none;border-left:solid #CCCCCC 1.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 6.0pt;margin-left:4.8pt;margin-top:5.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:5.0pt"><ul type="disc"><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">Creation of a legally separated affiliate, Post-Transition IANA (PTI), to provide the IANA functions.<o:p></o:p></span></font></li></ul></blockquote><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">This would be followed by the existing bullets:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><blockquote style="border:none;border-left:solid #CCCCCC 1.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 6.0pt;margin-left:4.8pt;margin-top:5.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:5.0pt"><ul type="disc"><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo6"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">Establishment of service level agreement between ICANN and PTI, the IANA Functions Operator for the Naming Related Services.<o:p></o:p></span></font></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo6"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">Changes proposed to root zone environment and relationship with root zone maintainer.<o:p></o:p></span></font></li></ul></blockquote><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">-- Brenden<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div></div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">On Mon, Apr 20, 2015 at 2:50 PM, Marika Konings <</span><a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank"><span lang="EN-GB">marika.konings@icann.org</span></a></font><span lang="EN-GB">>
wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Dear All,<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Please find attached an updated draft which now incorporates, amongst others, a summary for section III, DT X, information from the
legal memo, updates as a result of comments received and proposed text for section IIIB. Note that we’ve also reorganised the annexes to match the flow of the document.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><u><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Please note that that there a number of comments that have been flagged that need further consideration by the different DTs.
We would like to encourage the leads of the DTs to pick up on the items that have been flagged for review and provide feedback on those items to the CWG mailing list as soon as possible.</span></font></u><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Also, note that we’ve incorporated those edits and/or comments that we considered corrections and/or clarifications of existing content
as well as responses to some of the Sidley comments. If you do not agree with those responses or updates or are of the view that these are more than corrections and/or clarifications, please flag those accordingly. <o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">You are encouraged to flag any items that you think warrant CWG consideration by Tuesday 20 April at 16.00 UTC at the latest. Other
minor edits and/or clarifications can be submitted until Tuesday 20 April 23.59 UTC.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">For your convenience I’ve attached a redline and clean version both in Word as well as pdf.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Thanks again for all your feedback!<o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#888888" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(136, 136, 136);"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#888888" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(136, 136, 136);">Marika <o:p></o:p></span></font></p></div></div></div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p></div></div></div></div><p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt">_______________________________________________<br>
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