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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I think that Greg is right, that we were not mandated in the CWG to look at numbers or protocol parameters. While that might sit uneasily, I’m not sure I really
know about the flow of funding or the accountability/stewardship role in the light of Milton’s assertion.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Specifically asking CRISP & IANAPLAN for views as to where they would see their relationship lying (given the ring-fencing of the IANA functions operator into
a subsidiary in ICANN) would seem to me to be appropriate. They could, after all, contract/sign an MoU with either ICANN or ICANN’s affiliate.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Martin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Greg Shatan<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 21 April 2015 17:14<br>
<b>To:</b> CW Lists<br>
<b>Cc:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">I agree with Alissa that this needs to be clarified. Some of the lack of clarity is due to concern about having a proposal that goes beyond naming functions. This has resulted in some odd
phrasings and odd proposals.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">In my view, splitting the IANA personnel and assets so this is a "names-only" proposal is unrealistic and unnecessary. Because we are within ICANN, we have a different relationship to the
IANA Functions group. We should make it clear that the whole ball of wax would move to PTI, and put that out for public comment. We should flag this specifically for the CRISP and IANAPLAN group.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">Greg<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Tue, Apr 21, 2015 at 11:58 AM, Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">In this instance, I agree with Christopher. I believe both statements are accurate (though the first is less than mellifluous in its phrasing).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#888888">Greg Shatan<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Tue, Apr 21, 2015 at 11:36 AM, CW Lists <<a href="mailto:lists@christopherwilkinson.eu" target="_blank">lists@christopherwilkinson.eu</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I prefer the existing text, unchanged.<span style="color:#888888"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#888888">CW<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 21 Apr 2015, at 16:47, Brenden Kuerbis <<a href="mailto:bnkuerbi@syr.edu" target="_blank">bnkuerbi@syr.edu</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The first bullet in Section III.A says:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Section III.A.i.a, which is text provided by Sidley in consultation with the CWG, says:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I believe the latter statement is correct, and the prior bullet is inconsistent with it (or at least very unclear). Perhaps Sidley could provide more accurate text for the bullet in Section III.A, or I would suggest:<o:p></o:p></p>
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Creation of a legally separated affiliate, Post-Transition IANA (PTI), to provide the IANA functions.<o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal">This would be followed by the existing bullets:<o:p></o:p></p>
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Establishment of service level agreement between ICANN and PTI, the IANA Functions Operator for the Naming Related Services.<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
Changes proposed to root zone environment and relationship with root zone maintainer.<o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Mon, Apr 20, 2015 at 2:50 PM, Marika Konings <<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Please find attached an updated draft which now incorporates, amongst others, a summary for section III, DT X, information from the legal memo, updates as a result of comments
received and proposed text for section IIIB. Note that we’ve also reorganised the annexes to match the flow of the document.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Please note that that there a number of comments that have been flagged that need further consideration by the different DTs. We would like to encourage the leads of the
DTs to pick up on the items that have been flagged for review and provide feedback on those items to the CWG mailing list as soon as possible.</span></u><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Sidley comments. If you do not agree with those responses or updates or are of the view that these are more than corrections and/or clarifications, please flag those accordingly. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">For your convenience I’ve attached a redline and clean version both in Word as well as pdf.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Thanks again for all your feedback!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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