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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">David<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I think you are missing my point. I simply call attention to the fact that IANA is inside of and its staff are employees
of an organization (ICANN) that is overwhelmingly driven by names community priorities and finances. Do you seriously dispute that?<br>
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<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">By “control” I meant that IANA’s management were all hired by ICANN and accountable to ICANN’s board and dependent
on ICANN’s budget. I do not of course, mean that ICANN tries to control IETF processes or numbering processes.
<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">It is wildly inaccurate, and undermines the credibility of your comment, to suggest that IANA was “controlled” by
the protocols community simply because maintaining protocol registries accounts for a lot of the work. The protocols community stopped participating in ICANN as a stakeholder more than a decade ago, when the PSO was ended; it contributes no money to ICANN
and has no voting board member. It’s only ‘control’ over IANA is an MoU of unclear legal status which gives it the right to walk away from it and find another registry should it want to. That gives IETF a lot of control over who it uses for IANA, but very
little control over the IANA that resides inside ICANN.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">ICANN as an organization is financed primarily by the names community (more than 95% of its revenues) and probably
more than 95% of what it does is about names policy and naming-related issues. And that’s important, because as long as the management and accountability of the IANA functions for ALL operational communities are lodged inside an entity so dominated by ONE
community there is an asymmetry in the institutional architecture that is problematic.
<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">NTIA oversight mitigated that somewhat, but that is going away.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I know that ICANN employees don’t like to be reminded of ICANN’s design flaws, but I don’t think that gives you
license to dismiss reasonable statements as exaggerated or unhelpful. <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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Conrad [mailto:david.conrad@icann.org] <br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Sent:</span></b> Tuesday, April 21, 2015 2:55 PM<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">To:</span></b> Milton L Mueller<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Cc:</span></b> 'cwg-stewardship@icann.org'<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject:</span></b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Milton,<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">I don't think these sorts of exaggerated statements are helpful.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Historically, in terms of workload and policy setting, IANA was "controlled" far more by the protocol parameter community
than the names operational community (which is, of course, a subset of the ICANN community). And it is certainly not the case that the IANA functions were "operated" by the names operational community — IANA staff were not related to that community at all.
I don't believe that has changed all that much since I ran the IANA functions.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black;font-weight:bold">From:
</span></font></b><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Milton L Mueller <</span></font><a href="mailto:mueller@syr.edu"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">mueller@syr.edu</span></font></a><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">><br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span></b>Tuesday, April 21, 2015 at 11:32 AM<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span></b>'Martin Boyle' <</span></font><a href="mailto:Martin.Boyle@nominet.org.uk"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Martin.Boyle@nominet.org.uk</span></font></a><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">><br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span></b>CWG Mailing List <</span></font><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></font></a><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">><br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span></b>Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Martin</span></font><font color="black"><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I also think Andrew’s clear distinction between IANA and names-related IANA functions was correct.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"> </span></font><font color="black"><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Because IANA is currently controlled and operated by the names operational community (ICANN), there is no way for
a names proposal to _<i><span style="font-style:italic">not</span></i>_ touch on numbers or protocol parameters in some way. That is the “design flaw” that makes the names part of this hard. The legal separation makes this issue less of a problem but will
require some coordination and adjustment by the other OCs. But that is not a big deal; the numbers proposal already required some adjustment and coordination by the protocols community. There is no way to avoid these interdependencies. But adjustments to
facilitate compatibility are not the same as one OC telling another what to do. </span>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black;font-weight:bold">From:</span></font></b><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">
</span></font><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</span></font></a><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">
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<b><span style="font-weight:bold">On Behalf Of </span></b>Martin Boyle<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Sent:</span></b> Tuesday, April 21, 2015 12:33 PM<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">To:</span></b> Greg Shatan; Alissa Cooper<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Cc:</span></b> </span></font><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></font></a><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black"><br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject:</span></b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3</span></font><font color="black"><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="black" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black"> <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I think that Greg is right, that we were not mandated in the CWG to look at numbers or protocol parameters.
While that might sit uneasily, I’m not sure I really know about the flow of funding or the accountability/stewardship role in the light of Milton’s assertion.</span></font><font color="black"><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"> </span></font><font color="black"><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Specifically asking CRISP & IANAPLAN for views as to where they would see their relationship lying
(given the ring-fencing of the IANA functions operator into a subsidiary in ICANN) would seem to me to be appropriate. They could, after all, contract/sign an MoU with either ICANN or ICANN’s affiliate.</span></font><font color="black"><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Martin</span></font><font color="black"><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<b><span style="font-weight:bold">On Behalf Of </span></b>Greg Shatan<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Sent:</span></b> 21 April 2015 17:14<br>
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<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Cc:</span></b> </span></font><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></font></a><font size="2" color="black" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black"><br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject:</span></b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3</span></font><font color="black"><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="black" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:black">I agree with Alissa that this needs to be clarified. Some of the lack of clarity is due to concern about
having a proposal that goes beyond naming functions. This has resulted in some odd phrasings and odd proposals.</span></font><font color="black"><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="black" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:black">In my view, splitting the IANA personnel and assets so this is a "names-only" proposal is unrealistic and
unnecessary. Because we are within ICANN, we have a different relationship to the IANA Functions group. We should make it clear that the whole ball of wax would move to PTI, and put that out for public comment. We should flag this specifically for the CRISP
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="black" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:black">Greg</span></font><font color="black"><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="black" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:black">In this instance, I agree with Christopher. I believe both statements are accurate (though the first is
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="#888888" face="Verdana"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#888888">Greg Shatan</span></font><font color="black"><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="black" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">I prefer the existing text, unchanged.</span><o:p></o:p></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="black" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Hi Marika,</span><o:p></o:p></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="black" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">The first bullet in Section III.A says:</span><o:p></o:p></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="black" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">ICANN, through an affiliate controlled by ICANN, to continue as the IANA Functions Operator for the Naming Related Services through
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" color="black" face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">I believe the latter statement is correct, and the prior bullet is inconsistent with it (or at least very unclear). Perhaps Sidley
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