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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Glad you flagged this. I think this is more than an ambiguity, clarifying it is crucial to the viability of the
proposal. <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">It makes no sense to create a separate affiliate only for the names functions. ICANN should divest itself of all
of the IANA functions into the PTI affiliate; this is always what has been contemplated in these discussions. It is true that ICANN’s contract with PTI would apply only to the naming-related functions, so perhaps that is where the confusion came from. So
III.A should make it clear that all existing IANA staff, resources, data, etc. will move to PTI.
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[mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] <b><span style="font-weight:bold">On Behalf Of
</span></b>Alissa Cooper<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Sent:</span></b> Tuesday, April 21, 2015 11:56 AM<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">To:</span></b> Marika Konings<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Cc:</span></b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject:</span></b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">I realize it may be too late for this comment but I’m sending it anyway just in case.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">I think III.A.i.a and III.A are ambiguous as to whether the existing IANA staff, resources, processes, and data related to the non-naming functions (e.g., numbering and
protocol parameters) (1) are expected to move to the PTI, (2) are not expected to move to the PTI, or (3) whether this decision is to be left up to ICANN. I don’t think footnote 5 covers this, because it is not obvious that personnel, resources, etc. count
as “arrangements.” Furthermore, the decision of whether to move staff and resources to the PTI and the decision of whether to move an existing contract to the PTI are distinct. For example, the protocol parameters staff could move to the PTI but the IETF-ICANN
MOU could remain as-is. So I think for the other communities to be able to comment on the CWG proposal effectively, III.A.i.a needs to make clear which of the three options above the CWG is suggesting.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">This issue would be additionally clarified if the document referred to the “IANA naming functions operator” and “IANA naming functions” in all places where the text is
describing an arrangement specific to the naming functions (which seems like it would be most places where “IANA functions” is currently used, at least in Section III).<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Alissa <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">On Apr 20, 2015, at 11:50 AM, Marika Konings <<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org">marika.konings@icann.org</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Please find attached an updated draft which now incorporates, amongst others, a summary for section III, DT X, information from the legal memo,
updates as a result of comments received and proposed text for section IIIB. Note that we’ve also reorganised the annexes to match the flow of the document.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><u><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Please note that that there a number of comments that have been flagged that need further consideration by the different DTs. We would like
to encourage the leads of the DTs to pick up on the items that have been flagged for review and provide feedback on those items to the CWG mailing list as soon as possible.</span></font></u><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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as responses to some of the Sidley comments. If you do not agree with those responses or updates or are of the view that these are more than corrections and/or clarifications, please flag those accordingly. <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">You are encouraged to flag any items that you think warrant CWG consideration by Tuesday 20 April at 16.00 UTC at the latest. Other minor edits
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Thanks again for all your feedback!<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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