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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">My compliments and thanks to all of you who work long and hard to make this happen today.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Grace Abuhamad<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, April 22, 2015 7:50 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Brenda Brewer<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] Final Version for Publication (redline)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Sending this note on behalf of the Chairs — Grace</span></i><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Dear All, </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Attached is the final document (v3.5) to be published shortly as the CWG-Stewardship 2nd Draft Proposal.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Changes to the document include edits and suggestions that were sent to the mailing list following circulation of the document after yesterday’s call (v3.4).
In addition, in the interest of time, the Chairs had to make a few editorial decisions as listed below in order of appearance: </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">We have synchronised the Section III introductory text with the text we included in our Foreword/Executive Summary. </span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">We have removed the paragraph on the possible PTI Board roles, since (a) this text was suggested by Sidley Austin to be optional
and (b) it is dependent on the legal structure of PTI which we have not yet finalised (and therefore did not want to pre-empt in the Public Comment).</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">We have included and edited version of the placeholder text offered by Paul Kane regarding the progress in DT-A (SLE) work. </span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">We have edited Annex L on the Separation Review so as to reflect the status of the discussions in the CWG-Stewardship and again,
not to pre-empt in the document for Public Comment. </span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Staff will ensure the 2nd Draft Proposal will be published shortly. The ‘package’ of documents to be published will include: </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">A Foreword from the Chairs (which provides an executive summary of the 2nd Draft Proposal)</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">The 2nd Draft Proposal (with annexes)</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">The 2nd Draft Proposal (without annexes)</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">The Public Comment template (to provide a preferred structure for feedback)</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">An updated version of the XPlane Handout (which includes a visualization of the proposed post-transition model)</span><o:p></o:p></li></ol>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">As noted by Staff, we have cancelled the CWG-Stewardship calls on Thursday 23 April and Tuesday 28 April. <b>We will pick up again on Thursday 30 April at 11:00
UTC</b>. </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Please encourage your communities to join the briefing webinars on Friday 24 April: <a href="https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-04-16-en"><span style="color:purple">https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-04-16-en</span></a>.
For RSVPs, please contact Brenda Brewer. </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Thank-you to all of you and the ICANN staff who have contributed significant effort over a short space of time.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Best wishes,</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Jonathan and Lise</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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