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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I want to once again thank staff for the extensive and excellent work they did to review comments, insert them into the review tool and draft CWG responses.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">In the attached file I inserted 60 comments regarding the proposed CWG responses. Please note that they are my personal comments because there was not time
to get feedback from my Verisign colleagues or from my RySG colleagues. I am not sure what the process will be in terms of finalizing the review tool document but I hope that my comments will be constructive whatever the process is.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Grace Abuhamad<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 22, 2015 2:34 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Brenda Brewer<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] For your review: public comment summary and review tool<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Staff has compiled a summary overview of the pubic comment submissions and filled out a public comment review tool, noting responses and specific action items
for the CWG-Stewardship to consider. Please review these documents and suggest edits based on your assessment of the public comment submissions. The proposed actions for the CWG-Stewardship are highlighted in
<b><i><span style="background:aqua">blue</span></i></b> in the response column (far right). <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">The Public Comment Review Tool is very long and may be difficult to read. This is due to staff’s approach in thorough and detailed review.
<b>We will provide a more digestible, action-focused, version of this tool for Tuesday’s meeting.
</b>We are providing the long version to you today to demonstrate our work progress and preparation for next week’s high-intensity meetings. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">While the Public Comment Review Tool is very detailed, the summary overview is presented in a presentation format and focuses more on the “bigger picture”. Depending
on your review-style, you may be inclined to start with one or the other document. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Also, please note that these documents incorporate all
</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:red">(44) submissions received up until the deadline on 20 May at 23:59 UTC</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">. As of 22 May at 16:00
UTC, there are (7) late submissions. These submissions have not yet been incorporated in this document but will be added in time for the high-intensity meetings (along with the submissions received based on the extension for those who are reliant on translations). <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">As a reminder, Brenda kindly pulled all the submissions together on the Wiki: <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/o5A0Aw"><span style="color:purple">https://community.icann.org/x/o5A0Aw</span></a>.
You can download all the files at once (like a zip file) by clicking on the “download all” button at the bottom left side of the macro. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Have a good (submission-reading-filled) weekend, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Grace<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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