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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext">Von:</span></b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext"> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>Im Auftrag von </b>Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond<br>
<b>Gesendet:</b> Montag, 25. Mai 2015 20:46<br>
<b>An:</b> Bernard Turcotte; Gomes, Chuck<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Brenda Brewer; cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Betreff:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review: public comment summary and review tool<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Thanks for the explanation, Bernie.<br>
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I do have a caveat about the method of calculation for the presentation slides: they appear to take each response on a par level, thus a comment from an Organisation or Government or an ICANN SO/AC appears to have the same weight as a response from an individual.
Granted, the majority of comments were filed on behalf of organisations but I would be careful about reading too much into the percentages that were calculated - and am therefore concerned about having a cut-off at 10%. We are going to need to read through
the whole set of comments to have a better feeling of the response from the community.<br>
Kindest regards,<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 22/05/2015 21:41, Bernard Turcotte wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Exactly what it says, if for a given category 10% or more of respondents stated an opinion for or against it was included.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Does this help?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Fri, May 22, 2015 at 3:37 PM, Gomes, Chuck <<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com" target="_blank">cgomes@verisign.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:90%;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">On slide 4 of the presentation showing the major trends, what does the following statement mean: “</span><span lang="EN-CA" style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Those
categories representing more than 10% of responses are presented in this document.</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:90%;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">”?</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:90%;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Chuck</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Grace Abuhamad<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 22, 2015 2:34 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org" target="_blank">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Brenda Brewer<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] For your review: public comment summary and review tool</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Dear all, </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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review tool, noting responses and specific action items for the CWG-Stewardship to consider. Please review these documents and suggest edits based on your assessment of the public comment submissions. The proposed actions for the CWG-Stewardship are highlighted
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in thorough and detailed review. <b>We will provide a more digestible, action-focused, version of this tool for Tuesday’s meeting.
</b>We are providing the long version to you today to demonstrate our work progress and preparation for next week’s high-intensity meetings. </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Also, please note that these documents incorporate all
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:red">(44) submissions received up until the deadline on 20 May at 23:59 UTC</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">. As of 22
May at 16:00 UTC, there are (7) late submissions. These submissions have not yet been incorporated in this document but will be added in time for the high-intensity meetings (along with the submissions received based on the extension for those who are reliant
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You can download all the files at once (like a zip file) by clicking on the “download all” button at the bottom left side of the macro. </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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