<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div>Apologies, someone just pointed out I attached the wrong document. Please find attached version 2. You can ignore the document I sent you in the previous email, the work on the public comment review tool has not been completed yet.</div><div><br></div><div>Best regards,</div><div><br></div><div>Marika</div><div><br></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"><div style="font-family:Calibri; font-size:11pt; text-align:left; color:black; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0in; PADDING-LEFT: 0in; PADDING-RIGHT: 0in; BORDER-TOP: #b5c4df 1pt solid; BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 3pt"><span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span> Marika Konings <<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org">marika.konings@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span> Wednesday 3 June 2015 16:08<br><span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span> "<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span> For your review - CWG-Stewardship Proposal v2<br></div><div><br></div><div><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div>Dear All,</div><div><br></div><div>Please find attached version 2 of the proposal for your review which includes amongst others:</div><div><ul><li>Jonathan’s edits</li><li>Paragraph 102 — CWG edits</li><li>Paragraph 106 — Martin addition</li><li>Paragraph 111— Martin addition</li><li>Paragraph 150 — CWG edits</li><li>Paragraph 226 (Annex F) — Martin addition</li><li>Paragraph 233 table — Martin addition</li><li>Updated Section VI </li><li>Updates from DT F concerning root zone maintainer and root zone environment</li><li>Suggested changes to address Andrew’s comments in paragraph 96 and 107</li><li>Updates to Annex F</li><li>Updates to Annex J per DT M’s feedback</li></ul></div><div>Please note that there are still some outstanding items that we expect to update as soon as input is received, for example from DT C concerning the CSC Charter, paragraph 123 (note action item for Avri), outstanding issue in Annex J under discussion by DT M and C, DT A input concerning Annex H, but we already wanted to give you an opportunity to review these latests updates. Furthermore, we will continue working on proofreading and formatting of the document and annexes. </div><div><br></div><div>Please share any comments and/or edits you have with the mailing list.</div><div><br></div><div>Best regards,</div><div><br></div><div>Marika </div></div></div></span></body></html>