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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Regarding the CCWG dependencies document, I made one very minor edit and two substantial edits that are highlighted in the attached file that I think are very important.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Jonathan Robinson<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, June 04, 2015 3:51 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] FW: [client com] CWG Proposal - Sidley Comments<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">All.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">FYI. Please see attached from Sidley on review by them of the draft final proposal and in response to the CWG’s instructions managed by the CWG Client Committee.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">Jonathan<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Flanagan, Sharon [<a href="mailto:sflanagan@sidley.com">mailto:sflanagan@sidley.com</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> 04 June 2015 06:16<br>
<b>To:</b> Client Committee; (<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>)<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [client com] CWG Proposal - Sidley Comments<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Dear All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Attached are Sidley’s comments on the revised CWG proposal. Our comments are reflected in tracked changes to the marked version circulated on June 3 (word document titled Final Transition
Proposal). We have also attached a redline showing only our incremental changed pages (pdf document titled Sidley Comments…).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">In addition, attached is a draft of language expressing the conditionality of the CWG proposal on the requisite CCWG accountability mechanisms. This is marked against current paragraph 105
in the CWG proposal.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">SHARON</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""> <b>FLANAGAN</b></span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""><br>
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