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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">My input on Proposal v.3 is highlighted in the attached file. Note in all cases where I suggested edits I also entered a comment except in one footnote where
I made a very minor edit and Word wouldn’t let me insert a comment.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Grace Abuhamad<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, June 05, 2015 12:07 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] Transition Proposal v.3 -- Edits due on Sunday at 23:59 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Dear all, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Attached is the updated proposal. This version includes the edits listed below.
</span><b><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:red">Your comments are requested and welcome until Sunday 23:59 UTC.</span></b><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black"> If you don’t have
time to read the whole proposal, I’ve highlighted specific areas in the document that require feedback. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Areas that require feedback</span></b><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Paragraph 164 (p.32): needs text<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Paragraph 172 (p.34): DT-F to confirm edit<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Section IV edits should be reviewed by CWG (Andrew perhaps?)<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Section VI edits should be reviewed by CWG (Avri perhaps?) <o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Footnote (p.65): DT-N to respond to Sidley about status of footnote<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Page 73: DT-C to confirm response to Sidley comment<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Page 80: DT-M to review footnote<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Page 81: DT-M/DT-C to comment on Sidley note <o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Paragraph 389 (p.92): DT-N/SR/X to define “Review Team Liaison” per Sidley’s comment<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Page 111 & 112: Bernard to address Sidley comments<o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Edits included in version 3</span></b><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">All the comments & edits from Greg, Avri, Sidley, Lise and Andrew. <o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">The following items from today’s call: <o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Paragraph <span style="background:white">
123 has been reviewed to be internally consistent </span></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Paragraph <span style="background:white">141: adjusted text around CCWG-Accountability structure</span></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Paragraph<span style="background:white"> 167: removed sentence </span></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";background:white">Paragraph 170: Removed the word “multistakholder" and use 'customer-based' instead)</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<span style="font-size:7.0pt;background:white"> </span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";background:white">Added footnote to paragraph 169 about .INT (footnote is also in Annex to section II)</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";background:white">Paragraph 275: fixed composition of IFRT (and also fixed this in SCWG composition)</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo2">
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Annex S: <span style="background:white">
Added disclaimer about term sheet</span></span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">DT C Charter updates (see Section III and Annex G)</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Section IV edits</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Section VI edits</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">As you know, we had a technical glitch with document versions right before the call yesterday. In recovering the version, there were a lot of formatting changes
that had to be done. I have attached version 2.5 (the in-between version) so that you have it,
<b>but please note that version 3 is the version to work off of.</b> There are still lots of formatting fixes in version 3, but we will work on these over the weekend and on Monday. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">We are almost there!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Grace<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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