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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I support many of the edits/changes that Jonathan proposed, but would highlight in particular this one:
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo10"><![if !supportLists]><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Symbol"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<font size="1" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></font></span></span></font><![endif]><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Paragraph 112 (PTI board) replace the word “could” with “must”<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Also, in same paragraph delete the phrase “</span></font>(who may or may not be members of the ICANN Board)”.
<font size="2" color="#5b9bd5" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><font color="black"><span style="color:windowtext">As noted
during the phone conversations, some of us do not consider ICANN board members to be independent enough, but others may not agree. So I suggest not mentioning it specifically. <o:p></o:p></span></font></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#5b9bd5" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><font color="black"><span style="color:windowtext">Para
116: Chuck notes that something is missing or awkward about this phrase in <o:p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">the changing relationship post-IANA Stewardship Transition
</span></font><o:p></o:p></p>
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should be “the changing relationship between IANA and ICANN.”<o:p></o:p></span></font></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#5b9bd5" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#5b9bd5" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><font color="black"><span style="color:windowtext">Referring
to comments by Andrew Sullivan I agree that the removal of the word “naming” from
</span></font></span></font>¶406 (Annex L) <font size="2" color="#5b9bd5" face="Calibri">
<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><font color="black"><span style="color:windowtext">would be a mistake. Although we want all the current
IANA functions, resources and staff to be transferred to PTI, the separation process described in Annex L would ONLY apply to the naming related functions.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#5b9bd5" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#5b9bd5" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#1F4E79;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><font color="black"><span style="color:windowtext">In
that vein, I would have real trouble with Martin’s suggestion that in </span></font></span></font><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Paragraph 108 that “it
[would] be easier to grant the PTI rights to use while keeping these under the rights of ICANN?” This undermines the whole PTI model, which was to create a separate corporate affiliate, not a mere “right to use” relationship. I don’t think we should be fiddling
with fundamental elements of the model at this point. <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:5.25pt"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">--MM<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;font-weight:bold">From:</span></font></b><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] <b><span style="font-weight:bold">On Behalf Of
</span></b>Jonathan Robinson<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Sent:</span></b> Sunday, June 7, 2015 5:58 PM<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">To:</span></b> 'Gomes, Chuck'; 'Grace Abuhamad'; cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject:</span></b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Transition Proposal v.3 -- Edits due on Sunday at 23:59 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I chose to layer my edits onto Chuck’s redline.
<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">That way, staff have a single document that contains both.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I trust that this is helpful.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Thank you to everyone for hard work and a comprehensive proposal which has emerged.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Jonathan<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;font-weight:bold">From:</span></font></b><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif"> Gomes, Chuck
[</span></font><a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com"><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">mailto:cgomes@verisign.com</span></font></a><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">]
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<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Sent:</span></b> 06 June 2015 01:15<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">To:</span></b> Grace Abuhamad; </span></font><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></font></a><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif"><br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject:</span></b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Transition Proposal v.3 -- Edits due on Sunday at 23:59 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">My input on Proposal v.3 is highlighted in the attached file. Note in all cases where I suggested edits I also
entered a comment except in one footnote where I made a very minor edit and Word wouldn’t let me insert a comment.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="#1f497d" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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</span></font><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org"><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</span></font></a><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">
[</span></font><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org"><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</span></font></a><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">]
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">On Behalf Of </span></b>Grace Abuhamad<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Sent:</span></b> Friday, June 05, 2015 12:07 AM<br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">To:</span></b> </span></font><a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></font></a><font size="2" face="Tahoma"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif"><br>
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject:</span></b> [CWG-Stewardship] Transition Proposal v.3 -- Edits due on Sunday at 23:59 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Dear all, <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Attached is the updated proposal. This version includes the edits listed below.
</span></font><b><font size="2" color="red" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:red;font-weight:bold">Your comments are requested and welcome until Sunday 23:59 UTC.</span></font></b><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">
If you don’t have time to read the whole proposal, I’ve highlighted specific areas in the document that require feedback. <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Paragraph 172 (p.34): DT-F to confirm edit<o:p></o:p></span></font></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l4 level1 lfo3">
<font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Section IV edits should be reviewed by CWG (Andrew perhaps?)<o:p></o:p></span></font></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l4 level1 lfo3">
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<font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Footnote (p.65): DT-N to respond to Sidley about status of footnote<o:p></o:p></span></font></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l4 level1 lfo3">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black;font-weight:bold">Edits included in version 3</span></font></b><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">: <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<span style="background:white">Added disclaimer about term sheet</span></span></font><font size="2" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></font></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">As you know, we had a technical glitch with document versions right before the call yesterday. In recovering the version,
there were a lot of formatting changes that had to be done. I have attached version 2.5 (the in-between version) so that you have it,
<b><span style="font-weight:bold">but please note that version 3 is the version to work off of.</span></b> There are still lots of formatting fixes in version 3, but we will work on these over the weekend and on Monday. <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="2" color="black" face="Calibri"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">We are almost there!<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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