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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Hi All,
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">As I won&#8217;t be on this evening&#8217;s call. I thought I should flag the following points from the new document:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Paragraph 108 (p. 24) &amp; comment MK8:&nbsp; I&#8217;m not sure that the response to my comment answers my question, which is about the proposal to transfer to
 related resources, processes, data, and know-how to the PTI.&nbsp; The draft recommends this, but I want to know how easy it would be for ICANN to recover these assets should it need to transfer the service to a new operator.&nbsp; I would have expected rights to be
 held by the parent, so I am curious how the proposal will work down the track.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">&middot;<span style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Paragraph 120 &amp; footnote 11:&nbsp; I am ok with this wording, which seems to allow for some flexibility should two reviews appear in quick succession.&nbsp;
 (In the footnote it should read &#8220;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">If
<b>a</b> Special IFR is initiated&#8230;</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Paragraph 128:&nbsp; I&#8217;m not sure why this is being deleted.&nbsp; I guess it is a bit of detail, but it would be good to ensure that a transfer of the IANA
 functions operation be evaluated after a reasonable amount of time (and not within the first few&nbsp; months of the new operator!).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Paragraph 132 (page 26):&nbsp; while I think it would be appropriate (if only as a courtesy) to escalate to both, this wording is ok for me.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Paragraph 134:&nbsp; I have commented on the DT-A revised text (which I think will need shortening for the main body of the text).
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Paragraph 191 bullet 3:&nbsp; I have sympathy with Chuck&#8217;s suggestion.&nbsp; It sounds to me an expensive and unnecessary level of separation, but I&#8217;m happy
 to be convinced otherwise.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Annex D diagram: my earlier comment was really about where does the IFR report &#8211; it is shown into PTI and ICANN Boards, whereas I think it should
 be into the ICANN Board.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">&middot;<span style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Annex G table p.76 last row:&nbsp; I&#8217;m ok with the points made by Donna, but the key thing is that this is remedial action.&nbsp; It is the next step &#8211; when
 attempts to correct fail &#8211; that it is put to the GNSO and ccNSO with a recommendation to move to escalation.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Annex J paragraph 382 3):&nbsp; I agree Donna&#8217;s point.&nbsp; There is a confusion of terminology between the role of the CSC to try to resolve problems and
 the wider role when it recognises that it was not achieving this and refers to the GNSO and ccNSO &#8211; the escalation step.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Annex L paragraph 394 2<sup>nd</sup> bullet:&nbsp; I would suggest, &#8220;Soliciting input on requirements to plan, and participation in, the RFP Process&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Annex S:&nbsp; IFR on special review:&nbsp; wording here is important &#8211; the CSC simply flags a need for a review, does not initiate it.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Annex S: Changes to key personnel:&nbsp; I would be happy with the PTI Board oversight suggested in KP99 &#8211; this is appropriate as it is accountable to
 the ICANN Board which is accountable to the community.&nbsp; However, the third bullet also needs removing or editing as identified by KP100.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Annex S:&nbsp; PTI not to change policies column 2 I think a word too many has been deleted!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">And that&#8217;s it, folks!&nbsp; Enjoy the call this evening.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Marika Konings<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 09 June 2015 13:15<br>
<b>To:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version 5<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">In order to facilitate the discussion and review of the latest version of the proposal, the Co-Chairs have reviewed the document and suggested a number of edits
 / responses to address the remaining comments that they believe reflect the views of the CWG-Stewardship. As a result, those items have been 'unflagged' (no longer highlighted in yellow) so that the focus of today's call can be on those items that require
 CWG input (highlighted in yellow). Of course, if you disagree with any of the proposed edits or believe further discussion is needed on some of these unflagged comments, please share those with the list so these items can be marked accordingly.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 committee as well as updates to the table of content, the escalation mechanisms flow charts to reflect the latest state Annex J and the emergency process figure (only formatting updates). &nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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