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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">This is looking very good to me. Thanks to everyone who contributed.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I think a very minor edit is needed in question 13: “</span><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">In the composition of the IFR Team, there is a
role reserved for a CSC Liaison, which could, but <s><span style="color:red">it </span>
</s><span style="color:#00B0F0">is </span>not required to, be the .ARPA domain. </span>
<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Grace Abuhamad<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, October 01, 2015 8:14 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] Responses to ICG Questions<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Dear all, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Following the call today, Marika and I have reviewed the responses to the ICG Questions and prepared a redline and clean version for your review. We received
some text from Alan Greenberg for the RZM questions and some text from Donna Austin for the .ARPA/CSC question. To summarize our edits, please refer to the notes from the call:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">3. ICG Questions - review of draft responses</span></i></b><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">ICG sent two batches of questions which are presented in the document on screen. CWG has already provided answers to questions. </span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">On RZM question #1: ICG misunderstood the NTIA/Versign proposal. </span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">On RZM question #2: we have a Standing Panel to approve substantial changes. So the answer includes, community consultation, expert consultation, and Board approval. Refer to paragraph 155 in
the CWG Proposal (1155 in the ICG). <b>Alan Greenberg: </b>Proposed reply to Question 2: Both descriptions are correct but incomplete. The full answer is addressed in paragraph ICG 1155 (CWG 155). A change in the responsibilities of the IANA Functions Operator
and the Root Zone Maintainer is clearly a substantial architectual and operational change, and is therefore subject to a review of the standing review committee and ultimately ICANN Board approval. Subsection 5 of paragraph 155/1155 requires consultation
through an ICANN Public Comment Process.</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">On ccTLD questions #3, #4, #5: These were drafted by the ccTLD members/participants. No comments or concerns. Thank you ccTLD members/participants. </span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">On PTI question #6: complete. no comments</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">On PTI question #7: Clarify text referring to "Community Mechanism" since the CCWG-Accountability is currently working this out. Additional clarfications listed in action item. </span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">On PTI question #8: no comments other than cross-checking with implementation. </span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">On PTI question #9: PTI Board is responsible, but there is also recourse to the ICANN Board. Confirm with lawyers</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">On questions #10, #11, #12 on scope: no comments</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">On question #13: representative of IAB or appointed person will be involved in process. </span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<p style="margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><b><span style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">Summary of current status on ICG questions</span></b><span style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">Further work needed on questions #1, #2, #7, #9, #13</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo2">
<span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"">Provisionally closed questions: #3, #4, #5, #6, #8, #10, #11, #12</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:black">ACTIONS</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:#0433FF">Action</span></b><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:#0433FF">(staff): update Question #1 text on RZM with latest sent to list (by Alan)</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3">
<b><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:#0433FF">Action</span></b><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:#0433FF">(staff): update question #2 per notes</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3">
<b><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:#0433FF">Action</span></b><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:#0433FF">(staff): incorporate Christopher's input (and any other input received) where
appropriate </span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3">
<b><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:#0433FF">Action</span></b><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:#0433FF">(staff): Clarify text referring to "Community Mechanism" (perhaps by capitalizing
the word Mechanism to refer to structure and by making a direct reference to the CCWG-Accountability). Add "in the event that there is divergence between the Board and the Community on an IFR decision/recommendation, the Community will be able to rely on other
mechanisms that are being developed by the CCWG."</span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3">
<b><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:#0433FF">Action</span></b><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif";color:#0433FF">(staff): update question #9 to include recourse to ICANN Board. </span><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3">
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