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    This is an interesting question.  Para 107 says: <i>This final
      proposal attempts to meet all of the above requirements by:</i><i>
      ...  </i><i> Establishing a contract between PTI and ICANN that
      will grant PTI the rights to act as the IFO, and set out the
      rights and obligations of PTI and ICANN</i><b><br>
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    Could/should the concerns raised by Becky and Greg be addressed in
    the "rights and obligations" part of the contract outlined above,
    and if so does the Draft Proposed Term Sheet in Annex S adequately
    account for the concerns raised in this thread?   (My cursory read
    suggests that it does not.)  <br>
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    Matthew<br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 26/01/2016 04:17, Greg Shatan wrote:<br>
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          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">That is my impression
          as well.</div>
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        <div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Jan 25, 2016 at 4:05 PM, Burr,
          Becky <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
              href="mailto:Becky.Burr@neustar.biz" target="_blank">Becky.Burr@neustar.biz</a>&gt;</span>
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                  <div>My impression based on the various posts is that
                    we need both a general provision regarding ICANN’s
                    obligation to cause the PTI to fulfill its
                    obligations (the failure to do so would give rise to
                    a standard IRP) and we need something to address SLA
                    failures, etc. with a operational (rather than
                    constitutional) standard of review.</div>
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                            style="font-size:9pt;line-height:115%">J.
                            Beckwith Burr</span></b><b><span
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                            style="font-size:9.0pt;line-height:115%;color:#008656">Neustar,

                            Inc.</span></b><b><span
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                          style="font-size:9.0pt;line-height:115%;color:#7d7d7d">/</span><b><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;line-height:115%;color:#068658"> </span></b><span
style="font-size:9.0pt;line-height:115%;color:#7d7d7d">Deputy General
                          Counsel &amp; Chief Privacy Officer<br>
                          1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington D.C.
                          20006</span><span
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                    style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Greg Shatan
                  &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com"
                    target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>&gt;<br>
                  <span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Monday,
                  January 25, 2016 at 3:22 PM<br>
                  <span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Becky Burr
                  &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    href="mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz" target="_blank">becky.burr@neustar.biz</a>&gt;<br>
                  <span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>"<a
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                    href="mailto:avri@acm.org"><a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:avri@acm.org">avri@acm.org</a></a>" &lt;<a
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                    href="mailto:avri@acm.org"><a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:avri@acm.org">avri@acm.org</a></a>&gt;, "<a
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                    href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a></a>"
                  &lt;<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
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                    <span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Re:
                    [CWG-Stewardship] CCWG-ACCT Request for Guidance on
                    PTI - IRP - Please respond by 23h59 UTC Monday 25
                    January 2016<br>
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                            style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">have
                            we specified that there should be such a
                            provision in the Bylaws?</div>
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                            style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I
                            guess we have left to "implementation" the
                            agreement between ICANN and PTI. I don't
                            believe this has been picked up yet.  Am I
                            correct?  If so, that should probably change
                            soon.</div>
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                            style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div>
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                          <div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Jan 25, 2016
                            at 10:45 AM, Burr, Becky <span dir="ltr">
                              &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
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                              #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"> Presumably
                              if ICANN has an obligation in its Bylaws
                              to ensure that PTI<br>
                              does the right thing, it will need to
                              create the necessary enforcement<br>
                              mechanisms in its relationship with PTI.<br>
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                                J. Beckwith Burr<br>
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                                General Counsel &amp; Chief Privacy
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                                On 1/25/16, 10:30 AM, "Avri Doria" &lt;<a
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                                wrote:<br>
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                                &gt;Hi,<br>
                                &gt;<br>
                                &gt;Another nagging question I have, and
                                one I think people tell me I am<br>
                                &gt;wrong about becase of MOUs and
                                contracts.<br>
                                &gt;<br>
                                &gt;In the PTI environment, given that
                                ICANN remains the representative for<br>
                                &gt;2 of the operational communities,
                                and they resolve their IANA issues<br>
                                &gt;with ICANN based on contracts and
                                MOUs, how do we expect ICANN to get<br>
                                &gt;what it needs from IANA on their
                                behalf?<br>
                                &gt;<br>
                                &gt;Will, as today. they just tell IANA
                                what to do and that will be the end<br>
                                &gt;of it.<br>
                                &gt;<br>
                                &gt;The other OCs have indicated that
                                any appeals mechanisms we create are<br>
                                &gt;irrelevant to their case - they have
                                their own methods.  But these<br>
                                &gt;methods involve ICANN and not PTI. 
                                Does ICANN need to appeal on their<br>
                                &gt;behalf?  How does it do this?<br>
                                &gt;<br>
                                &gt;avri<br>
                                &gt;<br>
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