<p dir="ltr">+1 to Chuck suggested modification. Minor question/comment:</p>
<p dir="ltr">Section 4 of Annex 7 "...or, in the case of joint PDPs, without the support of the supporting organizations that developed such PDP.</p>
<p dir="ltr">Considering that we are speaking in the context of names (and considering that the ccNSO has some level of independence policy wise?) Are there example of PDPs/policies developed by both the GNSO and ccNSO (since the ASO would be out of context here)? and secondly is there a definition of joint PDP somewhere?</p>
<p dir="ltr">The "standing" section refers to "IRP Subgroup", may I know who those are and where they are defined?</p>
<p dir="ltr">Regards</p>
<div class="gmail_quote">On 5 Feb 2016 5:42 p.m., "Gomes, Chuck" <<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com">cgomes@verisign.com</a>> wrote:<br type="attribution"><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">In the 2<sup>nd</sup> Reading Conclusions, item 1.a.iii.1 says: “</span>ICANN should consider modification of Registry Agreements with gTLD Operators to expand
scope of arbitration available thereunder to cover PTI service complaints.<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">” It seems to me that the wording should be stronger: “</span>ICANN
<span style="background:yellow">must modify</span> Registry Agreements with gTLD Operators to expand scope of arbitration available thereunder to cover PTI service complaints.<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">”<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">I think the same change should be made later in the document when this sentence occurs again.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Grace Abuhamad<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, February 04, 2016 5:18 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org" target="_blank">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] CCWG Update<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Today the CCWG-Accountability published its latest version of its recommendations on the IRP. Please see attached for text, and provide any comments you may have.
As noted in the email below: <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">This version has been generated from the conclusion of the third reading document and includes the modification required by the CWG for PTI and has been reviewed by Becky Burr.<u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">As such you will find attached 3 versions, Word and PDF red lined as well as a clean PDF version given the markups are extensive in some sections.<u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Once this legal review is completed
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<b><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black;background:yellow"> UTC Saturday)</span></b><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">, results of the review will be published on this list,
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we should do our best to not delay them further. If you are able to post on the CCWG list directly, that would be more efficient for them. Otherwise, I will work with the co-Chairs to transfer the information in time. <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<b>Date: </b>Thursday, February 4, 2016 at 2:45 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Accountability Cross Community <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>>, ACCT-Staff <<a href="mailto:acct-staff@icann.org" target="_blank">acct-staff@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Acct-Staff] CCWG - Recommendation 7 - Final draft version for legal review<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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