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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-IE link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif'> Burr, Becky [mailto:Becky.Burr@neustar.biz] <br><b>Sent:</b> 29 July 2016 17:57<br><b>To:</b> Jordan Carter <jordan@internetnz.net.nz>; Maarten Simon <maarten.simon@sidn.nl><br><b>Cc:</b> Katrina Sataki <katrina@nic.lv>; Nigel Roberts <nigel@channelisles.net>; Greeley, Amy E. <AGreeley@sidley.com>; Byron Holland <byron.holland@cira.ca>; Keith Davidson <keith@internetnz.net.nz>; Client Committee <cwg-client@icann.org>; demi@registro.br<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [client com] ICANN-PTI Naming Functions Agreement & Services Agreement Headers<br><b>Importance:</b> High<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'>Folks, I have taken a quick stab at addressing the problems that have been discussed. I will review a bit more carefully now, but please take a look and send me your thoughts on the approach<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-top:12.0pt;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:black'>J. Beckwith Burr</span></b><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#262626'> </span></b><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#3366FF'><br></span></b><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#008656'>Neustar, Inc.</span></b><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#068658'> </span></b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#7D7D7D'>/</span><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#068658'> </span></b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#7D7D7D'>Deputy General Counsel & Chief Privacy Officer<br>1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington D.C. 20006</span><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:gray'><br></span><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#008656'>Office:</span></b><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#7D7D7D'> </span></b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#7D7D7D'>+1.202.533.2932 </span><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#008656'>Mobile:</span></b><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#7D7D7D'> </span></b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#7D7D7D'>+1.202.352.6367 </span><strong><span style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#7D7D7D'>/</span></strong><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#068658'> </span><span style='color:black'><a href="http://www.neustar.biz"><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:#008656'>neustar.biz</span></b></a><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'>From: </span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'>Jordan Carter <<a href="mailto:jordan@internetnz.net.nz">jordan@internetnz.net.nz</a>><br><b>Date: </b>Friday, July 29, 2016 at 4:18 AM<br><b>To: </b>Maarten Simon <<a href="mailto:maarten.simon@sidn.nl">maarten.simon@sidn.nl</a>><br><b>Cc: </b>Chris Disspain <<a href="mailto:chris@disspain.id.au">chris@disspain.id.au</a>>, Becky Burr <<a href="mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz">becky.burr@neustar.biz</a>>, Katrina Sataki <<a href="mailto:katrina@nic.lv">katrina@nic.lv</a>>, Client Committee <<a href="mailto:cwg-client@icann.org">cwg-client@icann.org</a>>, "<a href="mailto:demi@registro.br">demi@registro.br</a>" <<a href="mailto:demi@registro.br">demi@registro.br</a>>, "Greeley, Amy E." <<a href="mailto:AGreeley@sidley.com">AGreeley@sidley.com</a>>, Byron Holland <<a href="mailto:byron.holland@cira.ca">byron.holland@cira.ca</a>>, Keith Davidson <<a href="mailto:keith@internetnz.net.nz">keith@internetnz.net.nz</a>><br><b>Subject: </b>Re: [client com] ICANN-PTI Naming Functions Agreement & Services Agreement Headers<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'>I share the concerns of other ccTLD reps. Happy to help from .NZ any way that may be useful - am copying Keith Davidson who was also an FOI person. <o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'>Jordan <br><br>On Friday, 29 July 2016, Maarten Simon <<a href="mailto:maarten.simon@sidn.nl">maarten.simon@sidn.nl</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p><blockquote style='border:none;border-left:solid #CCCCCC 1.0pt;padding:0cm 0cm 0cm 6.0pt;margin-left:4.8pt;margin-right:0cm'><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D'>Hi Chris,</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D'>I understood yesterday that the idea is to have the naming contract out for public comment on August 7. Ideally that version should contain the correct text. If not, we should use the public comment period to bring it up but that is of course less preferable.</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D'>Best,</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D'>Maarten</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black'> Chris Disspain [mailto:<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','chris@disspain.id.au');" target="_blank">chris@disspain.id.au</a>] <br><b>Sent:</b> vrijdag 29 juli 2016 9:10<br><b>To:</b> Maarten Simon; Becky Burr<br><b>Cc:</b> Client Committee; Katrina Sataki; Byron Holland; Greeley, Amy E.; <a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','demi@registro.br');" target="_blank">demi@registro.br</a><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [client com] ICANN-PTI Naming Functions Agreement & Services Agreement Headers<br><b>Importance:</b> High</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>Hi Maarten,</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>Becky and I were both closely involved, as was Bernie Turcotte, Bart Boswinkel and a number of ccTLD folks. </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>Can you give me some idea of the timing constraints we have on this?</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>Maybe Becky and I can start the ball rolling and get something out to the ccNSO. <b>Becky</b>, are you available over the next couple of days?</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p style='margin-bottom:12.0pt;min-height:14px;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px'><span lang=NL style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif;color:black'> </span><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p style='margin:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#9443FB'>Cheers,</span><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p style='margin:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt;min-height:16px;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#9443FB'> </span><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p style='margin:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#9443FB'>Chris</span><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>On 29 Jul 2016, at 17:02 , Maarten Simon <<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','maarten.simon@sidn.nl');" target="_blank">maarten.simon@sidn.nl</a>> wrote:</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#666666'>Thanks Chris,</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#666666'>I was just about to sort this one out as I also noticed and discussed with Paul Kane that the references to the GAC Principles where if necessary at least not specific enough. Would be nice if we could have someone who was closely involved in the drafting of the final text of the FOI go through the (last version) of the document and come up with suggestions to bring both documents in line. I could give it a try too but I wasn’t involved in the drafting of the FOI at all.</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#666666'>Best,</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#666666'>Maarten </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><b><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#666666'>From: </span></b><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#666666'><<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','cwg-client-bounces@icann.org');" target="_blank">cwg-client-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Chris Disspain <<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','chris@disspain.id.au');" target="_blank">chris@disspain.id.au</a>><br><b>Date: </b>Friday 29 July 2016 at 08:45<br><b>To: </b>"<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','cwg-client@icann.org');" target="_blank">cwg-client@icann.org</a>" <<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','cwg-client@icann.org');" target="_blank">cwg-client@icann.org</a>><br><b>Cc: </b>Becky Burr <<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','becky.burr@neustar.biz');" target="_blank">becky.burr@neustar.biz</a>>, Katrina Sataki <<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','katrina@nic.lv');" target="_blank">katrina@nic.lv</a>>, Byron Holland <<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','byron.holland@cira.ca');" target="_blank">byron.holland@cira.ca</a>>, "Greeley, Amy E." <<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','AGreeley@sidley.com');" target="_blank">AGreeley@sidley.com</a>>, "<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','demi@registro.br');" target="_blank">demi@registro.br</a>" <<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','demi@registro.br');" target="_blank">demi@registro.br</a>><br><b>Subject: </b>Re: [client com] ICANN-PTI Naming Functions Agreement & Services Agreement Headers</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>All, </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>A number of the clauses in this current draft are likely to be of significant concern to ccTLDs. I have highlighted some paragraphs in the attached which will need to be re-drafted IMO. </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>The references to RFC 1591 and GAC Principles seem to have been inserted by Sidley so may appear simply because of a lack of background information on the history of these matters. </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>If there is to be any reference at all to the GAC Principles (and I am unclear that there needs to be one) it needs to be specifically to the 2005 Principles and not merely an undated reference.</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>It is IMPORTANT to note that the GAC Principles 2005, by their own terms, apply ONLY if the </span><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:black'>relevant government and ccTLD manager AGREE that they apply.</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:black'>"1.3. These principles are intended as a guide to the relationships between Governments, their ccTLD and ICANN. They are not intended to be binding and need both Governments and Registries voluntarily to agree to apply them within their legal framework. If either the Government or the Registry decide not to adopt the principles, this cannot be held against the Registry, and the Registry still has a valid existence."</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:black'>This is a critical nuance, so any reference to the GAC Principles (2005) must say that only where the relevant government and ccTLD manager </span><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>agree they apply.</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>Further, the documents definition of ‘Interested and Affected Parties’ won’t work in respect to ccTLD matters. The Framework of Interpretation uses very specific words about who needs to be consulted regarding ccTLD matters.</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>I have refrained from offering any redrafted wording as I don’t think it would be appropriate for me to do so. However I strongly recommend that the leadership of the ccTLD community is immediately consulted so that acceptable words can be found (I have copied the ccNSO Chair and Vice Chairs into this email). Further, I believe that Sam Eisner will also be able to provide some guidance as to the pitfalls that the wording needs to avoid.</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>I am happy to assist in any way.</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#9443FB'>Cheers,</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#9443FB'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#9443FB'>Chris</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></div><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'>On 28 Jul 2016, at 14:10 , Hofheimer, Joshua T. <<a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','jhofheimer@sidley.com');" target="_blank">jhofheimer@sidley.com</a>> wrote:</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Client Committee – Attached is a further revised draft of the Naming Functions Agreement. For convenience, we have included a clean version and two redlines – an incremental draft marked against the Sidley draft circulated per the email below, and a cumulative redline against the original ICANN-legal draft proposal. </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Regarding Annex C, on our review many of the concepts do appear to have been incorporated either into the Naming Functions Agreement or into the governance documents. We have added only a few suggested, additional clauses related to Annex C in the attached draft, along with mapping to the particular provision in the Annex. </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Thank you and speak to you tomorrow.</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Best regards,</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Josh</span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><i><span lang=NL style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Joshua Hofheimer</span></i><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><i><span lang=NL style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Sidley Austin LLP</span></i><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><i><span lang=NL style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'><a href="javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','jhofheimer@sidley.com');" target="_blank"><span style='color:purple'>jhofheimer@sidley.com</span></a></span></i><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><i><span lang=NL style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>(213) 896-6061 (LA direct)</span></i><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><i><span lang=NL style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>(650) 565-7561 (Palo Alto direct)</span></i><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><i><span lang=NL style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>(323) 708-2405 (cell)</span></i><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></blockquote></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></div></div></div></div></blockquote></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span lang=NL style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:#666666'> </span><span lang=NL style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></div></blockquote></div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'><br><br>-- <br>Jordan Carter<br>Chief Executive, InternetNZ <o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'>+64-21-442-649 | <a href="mailto:jordan@internetnz.net.nz">jordan@internetnz.net.nz</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black'>Sent on the run, apologies for brevity<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></div></body></html>