<div dir="ltr"><div>Dear Andrew,</div><div>Tks again for your kind reply.</div><div>Please send me a red mark Word Version and I Will reply today.</div><div>I HAVE SOME CONCERS ON SOME OF THE CHANGED MADE BY GREC</div><div>Regards</div><div>Kavouss </div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2016-08-07 17:28 GMT+02:00 Andrew Sullivan <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:ajs@anvilwalrusden.com" target="_blank">ajs@anvilwalrusden.com</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">I don't know whetheer you will get that before tomorrow, and that is<br>
really rather late. Can you at least say what your concerns are?<br>
There really isn't a lot of time: this needs to go to public comment<br>
on Thursday. An additional day to wait for the comments would be bad.<br>
<br>
Best regards,<br>
<br>
A<br>
<div><div class="h5"><br>
On Sun, Aug 07, 2016 at 05:14:50PM +0200, Kavouss Arasteh wrote:<br>
> Seun,<br>
> I know that a word version was included but the Word Version is a clean<br>
> Text and it is difficult to identify the changes .I wish to see what was<br>
> the changes introduced by Greg<br>
> I still need the red mark text in WORD VERSION.<br>
> Regards<br>
> Kavouss<br>
><br>
> 2016-08-07 14:09 GMT+02:00 Seun Ojedeji <<a href="mailto:seun.ojedeji@gmail.com">seun.ojedeji@gmail.com</a>>:<br>
><br>
> > A word version was included in Greg's mail<br>
> ><br>
> > Regards<br>
> ><br>
> > Sent from my LG G4<br>
> > Kindly excuse brevity and typos<br>
> ><br>
> > On 7 Aug 2016 10:36 a.m., "Kavouss Arasteh" <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>><br>
> > wrote:<br>
> ><br>
> >> Grec,<br>
> >> Thank you very much for the amendments. I do not agree with some of them<br>
> >> In order to enable me to provide my counter comments to you, pls provide<br>
> >> a word version of your amendment as soon as convinient<br>
> >> Regards<br>
> >> Kavouss<br>
> >><br>
> >><br>
> >> 2016-08-07 0:22 GMT+02:00 Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>>:<br>
> >><br>
> >>> CWG,<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> I am forwarding a revised draft of the proposed Community Agreement<br>
> >>> relating to the IANA IPR. In addition to any other comments you may have,<br>
> >>> I draw your attention to the two specific items in the email below: (1)<br>
> >>> identifying an entity to sign for the names community, and (2) providing a<br>
> >>> brief description of the IANA Services used by the names community (<br>
</div></div>> >>> *see* Exhibit A for descriptions provided by the other communities).<br>
<div><div class="h5">> >>><br>
> >>> This will be the subject of further refinement by the IPR collaborative<br>
> >>> group early in the week, with the goal of initiating a public comment<br>
> >>> period as soon as possible after the CWG-IANA meeting on Thursday.<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Greg<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> ---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>
> >>> From: Hofheimer, Joshua T. <<a href="mailto:jhofheimer@sidley.com">jhofheimer@sidley.com</a>><br>
> >>> Date: Sat, Aug 6, 2016 at 4:55 PM<br>
> >>> Subject: [client com] FW: Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016<br>
> >>> To: Client <<a href="mailto:cwg-client@icann.org">cwg-client@icann.org</a>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Dear Client Committee,<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Attached please find a revised draft of the proposed Community Agreement<br>
> >>> for your review and comment. This is an iterative version prepared jointly<br>
> >>> by counsel (Sidley) to the CWG and counsel to the IETF Trust to reflect the<br>
> >>> 7-point discussion items. To be clear, it is still a work in progress, but<br>
> >>> we believe ready for the CWG to have an opportunity for review.<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Two important issues to highlight:<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> 1) the Names Community needs to determine who will be the signatory<br>
> >>> party, acting on behalf of the Names Community, to the Community<br>
> >>> Agreement. For your information, the attached draft has the organizations<br>
> >>> put forward to represent the Numbers and Protocols Communities; and<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> 2) we need a brief description of the IANA services to be provided on<br>
> >>> behalf of the Names Community. The following high-level description was<br>
> >>> included in a draft of the Naming Functions Agreement. If this is<br>
> >>> acceptable for including here is well, please advise (or we ask the Client<br>
> >>> Committee to provide a sufficient description):<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
</div></div>> >>> The “*IANA Naming Function*” is comprised of:<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> (a) Management of the DNS Root Zone (“*Root Zone Management*<br>
<span>> >>> ”);<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> (b) Management of the .INT top-level domain;<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> (c) Maintenance of a repository of internationalized<br>
> >>> domain name tables and label generation rule sets; and<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> (d) Provision of other services related to the management<br>
> >>> of .INT top-level domains, at ICANN’s reasonable request and at ICANN’s<br>
> >>> expense.<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Please provide any comment or feedback as soon as practical, as we are<br>
> >>> trying to finalize the draft for approval by the various stakeholders and<br>
> >>> release for public comment by Thursday.<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Thank you in advance.<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Cheers,<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Josh<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
</span>> >>> *Joshua Hofheimer*<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> *Sidley Austin LLP*<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> *<a href="mailto:jhofheimer@sidley.com">jhofheimer@sidley.com</a> <<a href="mailto:jhofheimer@sidley.com">jhofheimer@sidley.com</a>>*<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> *<a href="tel:%28213%29%20896-6061" value="+12138966061">(213) 896-6061</a> <%28213%29%20896-6061> (LA direct)*<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> *<a href="tel:%28650%29%20565-7561" value="+16505657561">(650) 565-7561</a> <%28650%29%20565-7561> (Palo Alto direct)*<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> *<a href="tel:%28323%29%20708-2405" value="+13237082405">(323) 708-2405</a> <%28323%29%20708-2405> (cell)*<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> *From:* <a href="mailto:iana-ipr-bounces@nro.net">iana-ipr-bounces@nro.net</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:iana-ipr-bounces@nro.net">iana-ipr-bounces@nro.<wbr>net</a>] *On<br>
> >>> Behalf Of *Jorge Contreras<br>
> >>> *Sent:* Friday, August 05, 2016 10:01 AM<br>
> >>> *To:* <a href="mailto:iana-ipr@nro.net">iana-ipr@nro.net</a><br>
> >>> *Subject:* [Iana-ipr] Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016<br>
<div class="HOEnZb"><div class="h5">> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> All – attached is a draft of the Community Agreement that Josh and I<br>
> >>> have collaborated on over the past two days. We believe that it reflects<br>
> >>> the current requirements of the parties, and submit it for your review and<br>
> >>> discussion.<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> A clean version, as well as a marked version against the draft of<br>
> >>> 07-30-16 (in PDF format) are attached.<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Please note a few items that still need to be completed, including the<br>
> >>> description of the IANA Names Service, the identities of the CCG<br>
> >>> representatives, etc.<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Best regards,<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Jorge<br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Jorge L. Contreras<br>
> >>><br>
> >>> Contreras Legal Strategy LLC<br>
> >>><br>
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> >>><br>
> >>> Washington, DC 20036<br>
> >>><br>
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