<div dir="ltr"><div>Seun,</div><div>I know that a word version was included but the Word Version is a clean Text and it is difficult to identify the changes .I wish to see what was the changes introduced by Greg</div><div>I still need the red mark text in WORD VERSION.</div><div>Regards</div><div>Kavouss </div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2016-08-07 14:09 GMT+02:00 Seun Ojedeji <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:seun.ojedeji@gmail.com" target="_blank">seun.ojedeji@gmail.com</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><p dir="ltr">A word version was included in Greg's mail</p>
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Kindly excuse brevity and typos</p><div class="HOEnZb"><div class="h5">
<div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On 7 Aug 2016 10:36 a.m., "Kavouss Arasteh" <<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br type="attribution"><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;padding-left:1ex;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid"><div dir="ltr"><div>Grec,</div><div>Thank you very much for the amendments. I do not agree with some of them</div><div>In order to enable me to provide my counter comments to you, pls provide a word version of your amendment as soon as convinient </div><div>Regards</div><div>Kavouss </div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2016-08-07 0:22 GMT+02:00 Greg Shatan <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;padding-left:1ex;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">CWG,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I am forwarding a revised draft of the proposed Community Agreement relating to the IANA IPR. In addition to any other comments you may have, I draw your attention to the two specific items in the email below: (1) identifying an entity to sign for the names community, and (2) providing a brief description of the IANA Services used by the names community (<u>see</u> Exhibit A for descriptions provided by the other communities).</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">This will be the subject of further refinement by the IPR collaborative group early in the week, with the goal of initiating a public comment period as soon as possible after the CWG-IANA meeting on Thursday.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"> </div><div class="gmail_quote">---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>From: <b class="gmail_sendername">Hofheimer, Joshua T.</b> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:jhofheimer@sidley.com" target="_blank">jhofheimer@sidley.com</a>></span><br>Date: Sat, Aug 6, 2016 at 4:55 PM<br>Subject: [client com] FW: Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016<br>To: Client <<a href="mailto:cwg-client@icann.org" target="_blank">cwg-client@icann.org</a>><br><br><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Attached please find a revised draft of the proposed Community Agreement for your review and comment. This is an iterative version prepared jointly by counsel
(Sidley) to the CWG and counsel to the IETF Trust to reflect the 7-point discussion items. To be clear, it is still a work in progress, but we believe ready for the CWG to have an opportunity for review.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12pt"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Two important issues to highlight:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12pt"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">1) the Names Community needs to determine who will be the signatory party, acting on behalf of the Names Community, to the Community
Agreement. For your information, the attached draft has the organizations put forward to represent the Numbers and Protocols Communities; and<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">2) we need a brief description of the IANA services to be provided on behalf of the Names Community. The following high-level description was included in a
draft of the Naming Functions Agreement. If this is acceptable for including here is well, please advise (or we ask the Client Committee to provide a sufficient description):<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p style="text-indent:0.5in"><span style="text-decoration:none">The “<b>IANA Naming Function</b>” is comprised of:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p style="text-indent:0in"><a name="m_-8987491239014815536_m_3178194957666628174_m_-252257849512952326_m_6520436911750736115__Ref456765300"><u></u><span style="font-size:12pt"><span>(a)<span style="font:7pt/normal "Times New Roman";font-size-adjust:none;font-stretch:normal">
</span></span></span><u></u>Management of the DNS Root Zone (“<b>Root Zone Management</b>”);</a><u></u><u></u></p>
<p style="text-indent:0in"><u></u><span style="font-size:12pt"><span>(b)<span style="font:7pt/normal "Times New Roman";font-size-adjust:none;font-stretch:normal">
</span></span></span><u></u>Management of the .INT top-level domain;<u></u><u></u></p>
<p style="text-indent:0in"><u></u><span style="font-size:12pt"><span>(c)<span style="font:7pt/normal "Times New Roman";font-size-adjust:none;font-stretch:normal">
</span></span></span><u></u>Maintenance of a repository of internationalized domain name tables and label generation rule sets; and<u></u><u></u></p>
<p style="text-indent:0in"><u></u><span style="font-size:12pt"><span>(d)<span style="font:7pt/normal "Times New Roman";font-size-adjust:none;font-stretch:normal">
</span></span></span><u></u>Provision of other services related to the management of .INT top-level domains, at ICANN’s reasonable request and at ICANN’s expense.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Please provide any comment or feedback as soon as practical, as we are trying to finalize the draft for approval by the various stakeholders and release for
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Thank you in advance.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt">Cheers,<u></u><u></u></span></p><div><div>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";font-size:10pt">From:</span></b><span style="font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";font-size:10pt"> <a href="mailto:iana-ipr-bounces@nro.net" target="_blank">iana-ipr-bounces@nro.net</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:iana-ipr-bounces@nro.net" target="_blank">iana-ipr-bounces@nro.n<wbr>et</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Friday, August 05, 2016 10:01 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:iana-ipr@nro.net" target="_blank">iana-ipr@nro.net</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Iana-ipr] Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:8.5pt">All – attached is a draft of the Community Agreement that Josh and I have collaborated on over the past two days. We believe that it reflects the current requirements
of the parties, and submit it for your review and discussion.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:8.5pt">A clean version, as well as a marked version against the draft of 07-30-16 (in PDF format) are attached.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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