<div dir="ltr"><div><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">Dea all,</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">Please KINDLY SLOW DOWN " Expert" “ Expert” </span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">There are other legal experts than those two law firms that are eligible
to comments</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">How many ideas we have received from these firms which did not suit
our case during CCWG WS1? `.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">We MUST respect other people having considerable experience and strong
legal background than those firs.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">When you said in the draft" </span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">Breaching
repeatedly " </span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">and legal
people on which you have full trust does not say " repeated "
may means two , three or more thus without specifying the frequency of breeching,
the term " Breaching repeatedly " has no meaning </span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 6.75pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">When you say OCS
collectively and unanimously agreed </span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">instead of «collectively
agreed without objections or abstention still you reject the idea</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 6.75pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">In the draft,
at several occasion the term “will “ has been used.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 6.75pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">In a legal document
either we use the mandatory term “ shall “ or optional/ quasi mandatory term “
should 2</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 6.75pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">Please read
my comments carefully</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
KAVOUSS </font></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2016-08-08 19:22 GMT+02:00 Gomes, Chuck <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com" target="_blank">cgomes@verisign.com</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Jonathan/Lise,<br>
<br>
You are probably ahead of me but, if there is time in our CWG call this week, it might be a good idea to discuss Kavouss's comments. Allowing the 'experts' to respond to his comments and other CWG members to discuss as well might help although I am not sure he will easily concede. It would at least document the discussion in a very visible way.<br>
<br>
I of course will respect your decision on how to handle this.<br>
<span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><br>
Chuck<br>
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</span><span class="im HOEnZb">Sent: Monday, August 08, 2016 12:46 PM<br>
To: Jari Arkko<br>
Cc: <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br>
</span><div class="HOEnZb"><div class="h5">Subject: Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016<br>
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Dear Jari<br>
I have made many comments during public comment period for CCWG. Non of them were consulted???<br>
<br>
Sent from my iPhone<br>
<br>
> On 8 Aug 2016, at 18:44, Jari Arkko <<a href="mailto:jari.arkko@piuha.net">jari.arkko@piuha.net</a>> wrote:<br>
><br>
><br>
>> That does not mean that my comments be ignored<br>
><br>
> No, of course not. What I said was that we have more time to consider additional comments during the public comment period.<br>
><br>
> Jari<br>
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