<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><base href="x-msg://21/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">Dear Jonathan, Dear Lise:<div><br></div><div>I do not support this option. I consider that the constitution of PTI should be deferred until the Nominating Committee has made its appointments.</div><div>Although I respect and admire the offer from the Co-Chairs to act as temporary alternates for the - not-yet-appointed - NomCom Directors, I would be concerned that you - as PTI Board members - would be subject to unreasonable and unmanageable pressures meanwhile, including in the election of a Chair of the PTI Board. </div><div><br></div><div>In the light of recent experience, I note that CWG has been driven by a few very interested stakeholders towards a position that would facilitate, if not anticipate, an early separation of PTI from ICANN and its probable severance into two or three distinct entities, and that this orientation has been facilitated, if not explicitly supported, by CWG counsel. Whereas I am reasonable certain that this does not represent the opinion of a wide range of other stakeholders.</div><div><br></div><div>Also, I suggest that it is time to call a halt to the vast volume of impenetrable legalese that has been generated in the matters of the PTI Bylaws, the licensing of IANA IPR, and the so-called Annexe C. Most of which is unnecessary for the Transition at this stage when - apparently - time is of the essence. Particularly as some of this material purports to address aspects of Internet management about which there are - to the best of my knowledge - no current concerns. Specifically, all discussion of the legal aspects of eventual separation, severance or separability, should be deferred until the Empowered Community has effectively taken a decision that we wish to move in that direction, the procedures for which having been defined in the Transition proposal.</div><div><br></div><div>More generally, the Empowered Community, the PTI Board, and - dare I say so - CWG's Legal Counsel have, perforce to date, no experience in the implementation of the proposed Transition.</div><div>I suggest that it would be prudent to let the Transition function, as proposed and approved, for 12 to 18 months before going any further. Meanwhile we should avoid proposals that are so detailed and abstract that they engender at best mistrust and at worst a fear of opportunism.</div><div><br></div><div>Regards</div><div><br></div><div>Christopher Wilkinson</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><div><div>On 09 Aug 2016, at 17:30, Jonathan Robinson <<a href="mailto:jrobinson@afilias.info">jrobinson@afilias.info</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div lang="EN-IE" link="blue" vlink="purple" style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: medium; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: -webkit-auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; "><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; "><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Hi Sharon.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "><br>The IOTF was simply put in place to provide a high-frequency touch point for ICANN staff as they worked on the implementation. The context for the introduction of the IOTF was the “secondment issue” whereby ICANN staff got too far ahead of the community in their implementation work. The IOTF had no decision making capabilities, these remained reserved for the CWG. Therefore, I am not sure it is necessary to reference the IOTF.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Accordingly, I would suggest rewording the below as:<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 45pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; text-indent: -18pt; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: Symbol; "><span>·<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; "> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span></span><b><i><span lang="EN-US" style="">CWG-Stewardship Comment</span></i></b><span lang="EN-US" style="">: <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: red; ">The CWG recognized<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="">that the Nominating Committee process for selecting the PTI Nominating Committee Directors would not be in place prior to the transition and<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: red; ">therefore<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="">recommended that the two directors be identified prior to the transition to serve in the interim until the first election of PTI directors. It was<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: red; ">proposed</span><span lang="EN-US" style=""><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>that the Co-chairs of the CWG-Stewardship, Lise Fuhr and Jonathan Robinson, serve as the initial Nominating Committee Directors until the first election of the PTI directors. The CWG-Stewardship supports this</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color: red; "><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>proposal</span><span lang="EN-US" style="">. Should these individuals be unable to serve, the CWG-Stewardship would select qualified alternate nominees, and appointment of these alternate nominees would be subject to ICANN’s approval (not to be unreasonably withheld, conditioned or delayed). The CWG-Stewardship proposes that Section 5.5.1 of the Draft PTI Bylaws be modified as set forth below to describe the process for selecting the initial Nominating Committee Directors to be in place at the time of transition. <o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Any comment from others?<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Jonathan<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-width: 1pt; border-top-color: rgb(225, 225, 225); padding: 3pt 0cm 0cm; "><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><b><span lang="EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US"><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Flanagan, Sharon [mailto:sflanagan@<a href="http://sidley.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">sidley.com</a>]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br><b>Sent:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>09 August 2016 06:12<br><b>To:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Client Committee <<a href="mailto:cwg-client@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">cwg-client@icann.org</a>><br><b>Subject:</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>[client com] FW: CWG Comment Letter - PTI Bylaws<o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Dear Client Committee,<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Attached is a revised draft of the CWG comment letter to the PTI bylaws. This reflects revisions to #4 and #5 of the comment letter. Specifically, we have revised the draft to address the appointment of Lise and Jonathan as the initial non-ICANN PTI directors. <o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">In particular, we would appreciate a review of the description of the IOTF work below for accuracy since we were not directly involved in those discussions.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Given the tight timing (comments are due on Thursday), we are sending this to you and ICANN legal simultaneously, and they may have further comments.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Best regards,<br>Sharon<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US"> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 27pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; text-indent: -18pt; "><b><span lang="EN-US" style=""><span>1.<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; "> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span></span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="">Initial Directors (Section 5.5.1)<o:p></o:p></span></b></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 27pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><b><span lang="EN-US" style=""> </span></b></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 45pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; text-indent: -18pt; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: Symbol; "><span>·<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; "> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span></span><b><i><span lang="EN-US" style="">Text from Draft PTI Bylaws</span></i></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="">:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="">For the appointment of the initial directors of PTI, Section 5.5.1 of the Draft PTI Bylaws provides as follows: “Other than Directors initially appointed by the incorporator of the Corporation (which Directors shall hold office until the first election of Directors) and the President of the Corporation, the Directors shall be elected by the Member at the annual meeting of the Corporation….” <o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style=""> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 45pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; text-indent: -18pt; "><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: Symbol; "><span>·<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; "> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span></span><b><i><span lang="EN-US" style="">CWG-Stewardship Comment</span></i></b><span lang="EN-US" style="">: In connection with the work of the Implementation Oversight Task Force, it was noted that the Nominating Committee process for selecting the PTI Nominating Committee Directors would not be in place prior to the transition and recommended that the two directors be identified prior to the transition to serve in the interim until the first election of PTI directors. It was recommended that the Co-chairs of the CWG-Stewardship, Lise Fuhr and Jonathan Robinson, serve as the initial Nominating Committee Directors until the first election of the PTI directors. The CWG-Stewardship supports this recommendation. Should these individuals be unable to serve, the CWG-Stewardship would select qualified alternate nominees, and appointment of these alternate nominees would be subject to ICANN’s approval (not to be unreasonably withheld, conditioned or delayed). The CWG-Stewardship proposes that Section 5.5.1 of the Draft PTI Bylaws be modified as set forth below to describe the process for selecting the initial Nominating Committee Directors to be in place at the time of transition. <o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 45pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style=""> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt 45pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US" style="">“</span><u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: blue; letter-spacing: 0.05pt; ">Each initial Director of the Corporation shall hold office until the first election of Directors for such Director’s seat. <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></u><s><span lang="EN-US" style="color: red; ">Other than</span></s><span lang="EN-US" style=""> </span><u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: blue; letter-spacing: 0.05pt; ">The initial<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></u><span lang="EN-US" style="">Directors<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span><s><span lang="EN-US" style="color: red; ">initially<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></s><u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: blue; letter-spacing: 0.05pt; ">shall be</span></u><span lang="EN-US" style=""><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>appointed by the</span><u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: blue; letter-spacing: 0.05pt; ">Member</span></u><span lang="EN-US" style=""> </span><s><span lang="EN-US" style="color: red; ">incorporator of the Corporation (which Directors shall hold office until the first election of Directors)</span></s><u><span lang="EN-US" style="color: blue; letter-spacing: 0.05pt; ">, with the Cross Community Working Group to Develop an IANA Stewardship Transition Proposal on Naming Related Functions selecting two qualified nominees for appointment as the initial Nominating Committee Directors by the Member. Other than the initial Directors</span></u><span lang="EN-US" style=""><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>and the President of the Corporation, the Directors shall be elected by the Member at the annual meeting....”<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US"> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span lang="EN-US"> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US"> <o:p></o:p></span></div><p style="margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><span lang="EN-US">****************************************************************************************************<br>This e-mail is sent by a law firm and may contain information that is privileged or confidential.<br>If you are not the intended recipient, please delete the e-mail and any attachments and notify us<br>immediately.<br><br>****************************************************************************************************<o:p></o:p></span></p></div>_______________________________________________<br>Cwg-client mailing list<br><a href="mailto:Cwg-client@icann.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">Cwg-client@icann.org</a><br><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cwg-client" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cwg-client</a><br></div></blockquote></div><br></div></body></html>