<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Kavouss,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">While I occasionally strive for amusement (and even more occasionally achieve it), this is not one of those times.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I apologize for not distributing it last night when I received it, but I was attending to family matters. There are relatively few changes in the document, so it shouldn't take too long to review.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I thought you would be happy that your comment on "unanimously" was taken into account, at least in part.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I'll endeavor to circulate further drafts upon receipt.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Aug 10, 2016 at 1:23 PM, Arasteh <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="auto"><div>Dear All</div><div>We have received a draft in the afternoon of 10 August for comment within less than 10 hours.</div><div>It is FUNY AND JOKE????</div><div><br>Sent from my iPhone</div><div><div class="h5"><div><br>On 10 Aug 2016, at 17:22, Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">All,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I have reviewed the revised version of the Community Agreement which represents good progress over the prior draft. I have suggested a few changes in the attached draft.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">An additional open item -- we need a description of IANA Naming Services. Again, even a tentative description would fill the void and allow for public comment on the draft language, rather than the void.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Aug 10, 2016 at 10:50 AM, Greg Shatan <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">All,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I am forwarding a revised version of the Community Agreement, prepared primarily by the IETF Trust's counsel. Please reply if you have any further comments on this draft. Please note that everyone (including the CWG) will have the opportunity to comment during the Public Comment period, which is set to begin <u>Thursday</u>.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">The major open issue is the entity that will be the signatory for the names community. It would be good to resolve this, even provisionally, so that it may part of the document when sent out for public comment.</div><span><font color="#888888"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></font></span><div><div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_quote">---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>From: <b class="gmail_sendername">Greg Shatan</b> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>></span><br>Date: Wed, Aug 10, 2016 at 10:46 AM<br>Subject: Fwd: [Iana-ipr] Revised IANA IPR Community Agreement<br>To: Client <<a href="mailto:cwg-client@icann.org" target="_blank">cwg-client@icann.org</a>><br><br><br><div dir="ltr"><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Client Committee, </div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Here is a revised version of the Community Agreement.</div><span><font color="#888888"><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></font></span><div class="gmail_quote"><div><div>---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>From: <b class="gmail_sendername">Jorge Contreras</b> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:contreraslegal@att.net" target="_blank">contreraslegal@att.net</a>></span><br>Date: Tue, Aug 9, 2016 at 9:41 PM<br>Subject: [Iana-ipr] Revised IANA IPR Community Agreement<br>To: "<a href="mailto:iana-ipr@nro.net" target="_blank">iana-ipr@nro.net</a>" <<a href="mailto:iana-ipr@nro.net" target="_blank">iana-ipr@nro.net</a>><br><br><br><div style="word-wrap:break-word;color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><div><div><div>All – here is a revised version of the Community Agreement reflecting feedback from our Monday call, as well as separate comments received from CWG and IETF. I hope that I have reflected everything accurately, and look forward to discussing any final changes before public release tomorrow.</div><div><br></div><div>Best regards,</div><div>Jorge</div><div><br></div><div><div><font face="Calibri">Jorge L. Contreras</font></div><div><font face="Calibri">Contreras Legal Strategy LLC</font></div><div>1711 Massachusetts Ave. NW, No. 710</div><div>Washington, DC 20036</div><div><font face="Calibri"><a href="mailto:contreraslegal@att.net" target="_blank">contreraslegal@att.net</a></font></div><div><font face="Calibri"><br></font></div><div><font face="Calibri">The contents of this message may be attorney-client privileged and confidential. If you are not the intended recipient, please delete this message immediately.</font></div><div><font color="rgb(0, 0, 0)"><font face="Calibri"><br></font></font></div></div></div></div></div>
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