[DTA - SLE] SLE Document with clarifying background info.

[Paul M Kane - CWG]

Thanks Kim

Would you please ask ICANN legal to check that NTIA has been sent the 
disclosure request for IANA Root Services.

Can the SLE DT we have a call on Monday (20th) next week to run through your 
comments and all being well the flow charts to make sure the SLE is complete.
What time (morning) works for you?

Best

Paul.

Quoting Kim Davies <kim.davies at icann.org>:

> Hi Paul, Hi all,
> 
> (I am not on the DT-A mailing list, so Bart/Bernie, if this submission is not
> accepted please forward on if necessary)
> 
> > Thanks for your time today.
> > 
> > To ensure we are all discussing/making changes to the same document -
> please see
> > the attached link - all edits should only be to this document going
> forward.
> > 
> >
> 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VMLsaL4z2OmnAsI6RFwbO0v2iE4YqJGSw4v53qtr_Lg/
edit?usp=sharing
> > 
> > Kim, we look forward to your constructive comments and rest assured we are
> very
> > willing to bring this to satisfactory conclusion asap.  We are fully aware
> the
> > SLE is being relied upon by other design teams within the CWG and needs to
> be
> > concluded before transition so we can all return to our day jobs. :-) 
> 
> Please find attached a redlined version of the document I downloaded from the
> above link. Most of them are comments, rather than edits, as clarifications
> of the intent are needed before I think I could propose useful text. I looked
> at it through a lens of implementability, plus trying to view it through what
> I think was intended based on other discussions on this topics I’ve had with
> TLD managers over the years.
> 
> I hope this is helpful in surfacing some of the practical issues we may face
> measuring along these criteria.
> 
> kim
> 
>