Hi all I have cleaned up the text and hoped you might have a last quick jog through it. https://docs.google.com/a/cdt.org/document/d/1QRiXP9-nxM-h8FgJ_FyM962EwdjnRESrDT2jOtlRZZ0/edit Thanks. Matthew -- Matthew Shears Global Internet Policy and Human Rights Center for Democracy & Technology (CDT) + 44 (0)771 247 2987