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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Ok, I will surrender
to the will of the group (as usual). Just out of interest
though, who of you who said lets all trust in good faith are
planning to work on the EPDP? there is nothing like eating
your own cooking to improve the drive for perfection.....<br>
</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">The purpose of a well
scoped Charter and set of deliverables is to make the task of
the working group clear and simple. I humbly submit, for the
record, that we have left a number of vague terms and timing
criteria in there, and it may cause problems later. A stitch
in time saves nine, as the old proverb says.</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Cheers Stephanie
Perrin</font></font><br>
</p>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2018-07-17 08:11, Erika Mann wrote:<br>
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<div>This group is tasked with (a) difficult goal(s). I share
Pam's concern concerning a 'harmonized access' model but this
shouldn't prevent this group from starting the work. </div>
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<div id="AppleMailSignature">As long as we keep in mind that
we're searching for a WHOIS (access) model that is workable -
and legally acceptable - in different jurisdictions, and as
long we don't become orthodox in our approaches, we should be
able to see a solid outcome emerging.</div>
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<div id="AppleMailSignature">Heather, framed it well in her last
email:</div>
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<div id="AppleMailSignature"><span style="background-color:
rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">"We need to resist the temptation
of usurping the work of the EPDP Team. If language is
redundant, they will work around it. If it is not perfect,
we will empower them to refine, and come back to Council
with questions where necessary. Let's get this team started,
and see if these last minute issues are truly obstacles to
their work."</span></div>
<div id="AppleMailSignature"><br>
</div>
<div id="AppleMailSignature">Kind regards,</div>
<div id="AppleMailSignature">Erika <br>
<br>
Sent from my iPhone</div>
<div><br>
On Jul 16, 2018, at 9:11 PM, Austin, Donna via Epdp-dt <<a
href="mailto:epdp-dt@icann.org" moz-do-not-send="true">epdp-dt@icann.org</a>>
wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Very
well said Heather.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">
Epdp-dt [<a href="mailto:epdp-dt-bounces@icann.org"
moz-do-not-send="true">mailto:epdp-dt-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Heather Forrest<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, July 16, 2018 5:43 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">Colleagues,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">We have travelled a long distance
together, and the small group has worked almost
non-stop on the scope for nearly 2 weeks now, up
against work and family pressures and the
tantalising photos of others' summer family
holidays. The weight of the task is pushing us to
our limits, and it kills me to see the significant
efforts at compromise from Panama and the two weeks
since come undone in the final 3 days.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">We've said many times - but I'll
repeat it here as now it's urgent and very real -
that the community's perception of the Council's
ability to deliver on its Bylaws mandate by running
this EPDP is at stake on Thursday. If we are unable
to agree on the charter, there is a live risk that
Pandora's box opens. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">We had a text that was fairly
stable as of Sunday, based on the timeline that we
agreed in the DT call last Wednesday. We need to
resist the temptation of usurping the work of the
EPDP Team. If language is redundant, they will work
around it. If it is not perfect, we will empower
them to refine, and come back to Council with
questions where necessary. Let's get this team
started, and see if these last minute issues are
truly obstacles to their work. If we do not get them
started, we may never find out. If you are willing
to work with the text we have as per Keith's Sunday
email and let the Team push forward, now is the time
to speak up.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">Best wishes,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">Heather<o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Tue, Jul 17, 2018 at 8:21 AM,
Pam Little <<a
href="mailto:pam.little@alibaba-inc.com"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">pam.little@alibaba-inc.com</a>>
wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Hi
Paul, </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Thank
you for the feedback. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;background:white">To
me, the goal of the Temp Spec and this EPDP
effort is very simple: to comply with the
law. </span>"Avoid the fragmentation of
WHOIS" or
<span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;background:white">the
idea of harmonization </span>as a premise or
goal is fundamentally flawed. As you know,
there is already fragmentation of WHOIS in the
cc world. As far as I know, .JP does not even
have a WHOIS service. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">More importantly, I would
like to point out the latest guidance<span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif"> </span>regarding
Codes of Conduct and Accreditation in <span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">the
EDPB letter
</span><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;border:none
windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in">(see page 6 </span><span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif"><a
href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.icann.org_en_system_files_correspondence_jelinek-2Dto&d=DwMFaQ&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=CwipU91YB6EkpFXK9ynnT_QUef4yC5p7jpsDm8cU97g&m=wQW2DCZFumEvcBcjrLYjWHhNX_WnA3nWfj5ZdnjZDak&s=rZ0OyCS9JwuSdabv4b6EZcmL-H0wrXCUaiB5LqM6zRI&e="
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;color:purple">https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/correspondence/jelinek-to</span></a></span><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;border:none
windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in">-</span><span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo"><span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">marby</span></span><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;border:none
windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in">-05jul18-en.</span><span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo"><span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">pdf</span></span><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;border:none
windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in">).
Specifically: </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">1.
<span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">Cer</span></span>tification
and/or accreditation are voluntary measures,
not mandatory.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">2. T<span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">he
responsibility for designing a model that
will provide the assurance [of compliance
with the GDPR] is, in the first instance, up
to the data controllers.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;background:white">The
previous langauge and your latest suggested
language pre-suppose there should be a "</span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri
Light",sans-serif;color:black;border:none
windowtext
1.0pt;padding:0in;background:white">community-wide
model for access or similar framework"</span><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;border:none
windowtext
1.0pt;padding:0in;background:white">, which
in my view, is inconsistent with the above
guidance.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">I
hope this explains my thinking for my
proposed edits.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Kind
regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Pam</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Sender:Drazek,
Keith <<a
href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Sent
at:2018 Jul 17 (Tue) 01:58</span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black"><a
href="mailto:To%3APMcGrady@winston.com"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">To:PMcGrady@winston.com</a>
<<a href="mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">PMcGrady@winston.com</a>>;
PAMELA LITTLE <<a
href="mailto:pam.little@alibaba-inc.com"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">pam.little@alibaba-inc.com</a>>;
<a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>
<<a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>>;
<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a>
<<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Subject:RE:
[Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope</span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Hi
Pam and Paul,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Attached
is an updated version incorporating
Pam’s edits and responding to her
questions. I incorporated Paul’s
suggested language below for Section J.
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Keith<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<div>
<div style="border:none;border-top:solid
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0in">
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b>From:</b>
McGrady, Paul D. <<a
href="mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">PMcGrady@winston.com</a>>
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, July 16, 2018
7:37 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Pam Little <<a
href="mailto:pam.little@alibaba-inc.com"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">pam.little@alibaba-inc.com</a>>;
<a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>;
<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">
marika.konings@icann.org</a>;
Drazek, Keith <<a
href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] RE:
[Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">Hi Pam,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">Thank you for
your proposed edits. However, I do
think that they eliminate an important
concept that we were trying to get at
and would prefer the question revert
to its previous formulation.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">If the DT
decides to eliminate the concept of
reconciliation/avoiding an
unharmonized approach, I still think
your proposed changes need some work.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">If we change to
“Can the obligation to provide
“reasonable access” be clarified or
defined…” I think that leads us down
the wrong path. J1 already focuses on
clarifying and defining reasonable
access. I think we could ask “Can the
obligation to provide “reasonable
access” be further clarified and/or
better defined through the
implementation of a community-wide
model…” We lose the idea of
harmonization, which was the purpose
of the question in the first place,
but ultimately those working on the
answer will hopefully take into
account issues that would tend to
bring a discordant result and try to
avoid those outcomes.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">So, Keith, we
would prefer that the question
revert. If we can’t get that, we
would be OK with:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">“Can the
obligation to provide “reasonable
access” be further clarified and/or
better defined through the
implementation of a
</span><span
style="font-family:"Calibri
Light",sans-serif">community-wide
model for access or similar framework
which takes into account at least the
following elements:”</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">Best to all,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">Paul</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b>From:</b>
Epdp-dt [<a
href="mailto:epdp-dt-bounces@icann.org"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">mailto:epdp-dt-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Pam Little<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, July 16, 2018 1:50
AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a
href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>;
<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a>;
Drazek, Keith <<a
href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com"
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope<o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Hi
Keith</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Many
thanks to you and the small
drafting team for the "final"
draft.
</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Because
of time zone differences, I have
not had an opportunity to discuss
this with my RrSG councillors or
RrSG members but, in the interest
fo time, I have made some
suggested edits and queries to the
final draft. Most of them are
intended to correct minor errors
or add more clarity and
consistency so I hope they are not
controversial, except perhaps </span>my
proposed change to J2 below:<o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;line-height:12.75pt;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start"><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black">"J2) Can the obligation to provide
“reasonable access” be
</span><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;color:red">clarified
or defined</span><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black"> <s>reconciled
with the objective of avoiding,
to the extent possible, an
unharmonized approach to
third-party access to
registration data, ,</s> without
the implementation of a
community-wide model for access or
similar framework which takes into
account at least the following
elements:"</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;background:white"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">It
seems to me neither the langauge
in the previous draft (re <span
style="border:none windowtext
1.0pt;padding:0in">fragmentation </span>of
WHOIS) nor the final draft was
helpful hence my proposed change
to try to make it more neutral. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">I
also have a question regarding
the last paragraph in the final
draft:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start"><em><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">"The
EPDP Team shall respect the
</span></em><span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo"><i><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black">timelines</span></i></span><em><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">
and deliverables as outlined in
Annex A and A-1 of the ICANN
Bylaws and the EPDP Manual. As
per the GNSO EPDP Working Group
Guidelines, the EPDP Team shall
develop a work plan that
outlines the necessary steps and
expected timing in order to
achieve the milestones of the
EPDP as set out in Annex A and
A-1 of the ICANN Bylaws and the
EPDP Manual and submit this to
the GNSO Council. Any
significant updates to the work
plan are expected to be
communicated in a timely manner
to the GNSO Council with an
explanation as to why the work
plan needed adjustment." </span></em><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">The
final draft Charter has set
<span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">timelines</span>
for <span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;background:white">Deliverable
2. Is the EPDP Team expected to
develop a work plan for all three
deliverables? </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Kind
regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">------------------------------------------------------------------</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Sender:Drazek,
Keith via Epdp-dt <<a
href="mailto:epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">epdp-dt@icann.org</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Sent
at:2018 Jul 16 (Mon) 13:08</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black"><a
href="mailto:To%3AEpdp-dt@icann.org" target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">To:Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>
<<a
href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>>;
<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a>
<<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Subject:[Epdp-dt]
EPDP Scope</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Hello
again everyone….<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Now
attached is the final draft of the
EPDP WG Charter scope section for your
review and our vote on the 19<sup>th</sup>.<o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">I
have attached the redline version
(against the version circulate to the
DT last Wednesday) and the clean
version.<o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Thanks
for your patience and for the
constructive input of all parties.<o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Keith<o:p></o:p></p>
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Drazek, Keith
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, July 15, 2018
10:28 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Drazek, Keith <<a
href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a
href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>;
<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [EXTERNAL]
[Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Hi
all. Please wait before reviewing. I
may have jumped the gun and we may
have more suggested edits incoming
from NCSG.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Keith<o:p></o:p></p>
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On Jul 15, 2018, at 8:44 AM, Drazek,
Keith via Epdp-dt <<a
href="mailto:epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">epdp-dt@icann.org</a>>
wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Hi
all,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">As
discussed on
<span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">Wednesday’s</span>
EPDP Drafting Team call, attached is
the final draft of the EPDP charter
scope section.
<o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">I
received a few suggested edits from
Stephanie and
<span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">Darcy</span>
and did my best to
incorporate/address them. The small
group has reviewed and agreed this
is ready for approval at the 19 July
Council meeting.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Thanks
to everyone for your contributions
to this effort.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Keith<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><Updated
Scope Section 15 July 2018 --
Consolidated Edits.<span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">docx</span>><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><Updated
Scope Section 15 July 2018 --
Consolidated Edits CLEAN.<span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">docx</span>><o:p></o:p></p>
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