<div dir="ltr">Colleagues,<div><br></div><div>We have travelled a long distance together, and the small group has worked almost non-stop on the scope for nearly 2 weeks now, up against work and family pressures and the tantalising photos of others' summer family holidays. The weight of the task is pushing us to our limits, and it kills me to see the significant efforts at compromise from Panama and the two weeks since come undone in the final 3 days.</div><div><br></div><div>We've said many times - but I'll repeat it here as now it's urgent and very real - that the community's perception of the Council's ability to deliver on its Bylaws mandate by running this EPDP is at stake on Thursday. If we are unable to agree on the charter, there is a live risk that Pandora's box opens. </div><div><br></div><div>We had a text that was fairly stable as of Sunday, based on the timeline that we agreed in the DT call last Wednesday. We need to resist the temptation of usurping the work of the EPDP Team. If language is redundant, they will work around it. If it is not perfect, we will empower them to refine, and come back to Council with questions where necessary. Let's get this team started, and see if these last minute issues are truly obstacles to their work. If we do not get them started, we may never find out. If you are willing to work with the text we have as per Keith's Sunday email and let the Team push forward, now is the time to speak up.</div><div><br></div><div>Best wishes,</div><div><br></div><div>Heather</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Jul 17, 2018 at 8:21 AM, Pam Little <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:pam.little@alibaba-inc.com" target="_blank">pam.little@alibaba-inc.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div class="m_1143864745865829759__aliyun_email_body_block"><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000">Hi Paul, </span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000"><br></span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000">Thank you for the feedback.  </span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000"><br></span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline">To me, the goal of the Temp Spec and this EPDP effort is very simple: to comply with the law. </span>"Avoid the fragmentation of WHOIS" or <span style="font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;font-size:14.0px;font-family:tahoma;color:#000000;display:inline">the idea of harmonization </span>as a premise or goal is fundamentally flawed. As you know, there is already fragmentation of WHOIS in the cc world. As far as I know, .JP does not even have a WHOIS service. </div><div style="clear:both"><br></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal">More importantly, I would like to point out the latest guidance<span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial"> </span>regarding Codes of Conduct and Accreditation in <span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial">the EDPB letter <span style="margin:.0px;padding:.0px;border:.0px;outline:.0px;color:#000000;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;font-family:Tahoma,Arial">(see page 6 </span><a href="https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/correspondence/jelinek-to" style="color:purple;text-decoration:underline;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;font-family:Tahoma,Arial" target="_blank">https://www.icann.org/en/<wbr>system/files/correspondence/<wbr>jelinek-to</a><span style="margin:.0px;padding:.0px;border:.0px;outline:.0px;color:#000000;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;font-family:Tahoma,Arial">-</span><span class="m_1143864745865829759spellcheck_typo">marby</span><span style="margin:.0px;padding:.0px;border:.0px;outline:.0px;color:#000000;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;font-family:Tahoma,Arial">-05jul18-en.</span><span class="m_1143864745865829759spellcheck_typo">pd<wbr>f</span><span style="margin:.0px;padding:.0px;border:.0px;outline:.0px;color:#000000;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;font-family:Tahoma,Arial">). Specifically: </span></span></div><div style="clear:both"><br></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial">1.  <span class="m_1143864745865829759spellcheck_typo">Cer</span></span>tification and/or accreditation are voluntary measures, not mandatory.</div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal">2.  T<span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial">he responsibility for designing a model that will provide the assurance [of compliance with the GDPR] is, in the first instance, up to the data controllers.</span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial"><br></span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial"><span style="color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline">The previous langauge and your latest suggested language pre-suppose there should be a "</span><span style="margin:.0px;padding:.0px;border:.0px;outline:.0px;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;font-family:Calibri Light,sans-serif;font-size:14.7px;background-color:#ffffff;float:none;display:inline">community-wide model for access or similar framework"<span style="margin:.0px;padding:.0px;outline:.0px;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;background-color:#ffffff;float:none;font-size:14.0px;font-family:tahoma;display:inline">, which in my view, is inconsistent with the above guidance.</span></span></span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000"><br></span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000">I hope this explains my thinking for my proposed edits.</span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000"><br></span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000">Kind regards,</span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000"><br></span></div><div style="clear:both;line-height:normal"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000">Pam</span></div><blockquote style="margin-right:0;margin-top:0;margin-bottom:0"><div style="clear:both"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000">------------------------------<wbr>------------------------------<wbr>------</span></div><div style="clear:both"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000">Sender:Drazek, Keith <<a href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com" target="_blank">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>></span></div><div style="clear:both"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000">Sent at:2018 Jul 17 (Tue) 01:58</span></div><div style="clear:both"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000"><a href="mailto:To%3APMcGrady@winston.com" target="_blank">To:PMcGrady@winston.com</a> <<a href="mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com" target="_blank">PMcGrady@winston.com</a>>; PAMELA LITTLE <<a href="mailto:pam.little@alibaba-inc.com" target="_blank">pam.little@alibaba-inc.com</a>>; <a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org" target="_blank">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a> <<a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org" target="_blank">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>>; <a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a> <<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a>></span></div><div style="clear:both"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000">Subject:RE: [Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope</span></div><div><div class="h5"><div style="clear:both"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000"><br></span></div><div class="m_1143864745865829759WordSection1"><p class="MsoNormal">Hi Pam and Paul,</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal">Attached is an updated version incorporating Pam’s edits and responding to her questions. I incorporated Paul’s suggested language below for Section J.
</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal">Regards,</p><p class="MsoNormal">Keith</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><div><div style="border-style:solid none none;border-top-width:1.0px;border-top-color:#e1e1e1;padding:4.0px .0in .0in"><p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> McGrady, Paul D. <<a href="mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com" target="_blank">PMcGrady@winston.com</a>> <br><b>Sent:</b> Monday, July 16, 2018 7:37 AM<br><b>To:</b> Pam Little <<a href="mailto:pam.little@alibaba-inc.com" target="_blank">pam.little@alibaba-inc.com</a>>; <a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org" target="_blank">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>; <a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a>; Drazek, Keith <<a href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com" target="_blank">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>><br><b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] RE: [Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope</p></div></div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d">Hi Pam,</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d">Thank you for your proposed edits.  However, I do think that they eliminate an important concept that we were trying to get at and would prefer the question revert to its previous formulation.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d">If the DT decides to eliminate the concept of reconciliation/avoiding an unharmonized approach, I still think your proposed changes need some work.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d">If we change to “Can the obligation to provide “reasonable access” be clarified or defined…” I think that leads us down the wrong path.  J1 already focuses on clarifying and defining reasonable access.  I think
 we could ask “Can the obligation to provide “reasonable access” be further clarified and/or better defined through the implementation of a community-wide model…”  We lose the idea of harmonization, which was the purpose of the question in the first place,
 but ultimately those working on the answer will hopefully take into account issues that would tend to bring a discordant result and try to avoid those outcomes.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d">So, Keith, we would prefer that the question revert.  If we can’t get that, we would be OK with:</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d">“Can the obligation to provide “reasonable access” be further clarified and/or better defined through the implementation of a
</span><span style="font-family:Calibri Light,sans-serif">community-wide model for access or similar framework which takes into account at least the following elements:”</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d">Best to all,</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d">Paul</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Epdp-dt [<a href="mailto:epdp-dt-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">mailto:epdp-dt-bounces@icann.<wbr>org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Pam Little<br><b>Sent:</b> Monday, July 16, 2018 1:50 AM<br><b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org" target="_blank">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>; <a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">
marika.konings@icann.org</a>; Drazek, Keith <<a href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com" target="_blank">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;color:black">Hi Keith</span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;color:black">Many thanks to you and the small drafting team for the "final" draft.
</span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;color:black">Because of time zone differences, I have not had an opportunity to discuss this with my RrSG councillors or RrSG members but, in the interest fo time, I have made
 some suggested edits and queries to the final draft. Most of them are intended to correct minor errors or add more clarity and consistency so I hope they are not controversial, except perhaps </span>my proposed change to J2 below:</p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:17.0px;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start"><span style="font-size:15.0px;color:black">"J2) Can the obligation to provide “reasonable access” be
</span><span style="font-size:15.0px;color:red">clarified or defined</span><span style="font-size:15.0px;color:black"> <s>reconciled with the objective of avoiding, to the extent possible, an unharmonized approach to third-party access to registration data,
 ,</s> without the implementation of a community-wide model for access or similar framework which takes into account at least the following elements:"</span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p></div><div><div><p class="MsoNormal" style="background-color:white"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;color:black">It seems to me neither the langauge in the previous draft (re <span style="border:1.0px none windowtext;padding:.0in">fragmentation </span>of
 WHOIS) nor the final draft was helpful hence my proposed change to try to make it more neutral. </span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:16.0px;font-family:Times New Roman,serif"> </span></p></div></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;color:black">I also have a question regarding the last paragraph in the final draft:</span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal" style="font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start"><em><span style="font-size:15.0px;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black">"The EPDP Team shall respect the
</span></em><i><span style="font-size:15.0px;color:black"><span class="m_1143864745865829759spellcheck_typo">timelines</span></span></i><em><span style="font-size:15.0px;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black"> and deliverables as outlined in Annex A and A-1 of the ICANN Bylaws
 and the EPDP Manual. As per the GNSO EPDP Working Group Guidelines, the EPDP Team shall develop a work plan that outlines the necessary steps and expected timing in order to achieve the milestones of the EPDP as set out in Annex A and A-1 of the ICANN Bylaws
 and the EPDP Manual and submit this to the GNSO Council. Any significant updates to the work plan are expected to be communicated in a timely manner to the GNSO Council with an explanation as to why the work plan needed adjustment." </span></em></p><div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p></div><p class="MsoNormal">The final draft Charter has set 
<span class="m_1143864745865829759spellcheck_typo">timelines</span> for <span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;color:black;background-color:white">Deliverable 2. Is the EPDP Team expected to develop a work plan for all three deliverables? </span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Kind regards,</p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Pam</p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;color:black">------------------------------<wbr>------------------------------<wbr>------</span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;color:black">Sender:Drazek, Keith via Epdp-dt <<a href="mailto:epdp-dt@icann.org" target="_blank">epdp-dt@icann.org</a>></span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;color:black">Sent at:2018 Jul 16 (Mon) 13:08</span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;color:black"><a href="mailto:To%3AEpdp-dt@icann.org" target="_blank">To:Epdp-dt@icann.org</a> <<a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org" target="_blank">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>>;
<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a> <<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a>></span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;color:black">Subject:[Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope</span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p></div><p class="MsoNormal">Hello again everyone….</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal">Now attached is the final draft of the EPDP WG Charter scope section for your review and our vote on the 19^th.</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal">I have attached the redline version (against the version circulate to the DT last Wednesday) and the clean version.</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal">Thanks for your patience and for the constructive input of all parties.</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal">Regards,</p><p class="MsoNormal">Keith</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><div><div style="border-style:solid none none;border-top-width:1.0px;border-top-color:#e1e1e1;padding:4.0px .0in .0in"><p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Drazek, Keith <br><b>Sent:</b> Sunday, July 15, 2018 10:28 AM<br><b>To:</b> Drazek, Keith <<a href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com" target="_blank">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>><br><b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org" target="_blank">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>; <a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">
marika.konings@icann.org</a><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [EXTERNAL] [Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope</p></div></div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><div><p class="MsoNormal">Hi all. Please wait before reviewing. I may have jumped the gun and we may have more suggested edits incoming from NCSG.</p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Thanks,</p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Keith</p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:16.0px"><br>
On Jul 15, 2018, at 8:44 AM, Drazek, Keith via Epdp-dt <<a href="mailto:epdp-dt@icann.org" target="_blank">epdp-dt@icann.org</a>> wrote:</p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Hi all,</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal">As discussed on <span class="m_1143864745865829759spellcheck_typo">Wednesday’s</span> EPDP Drafting Team call, attached is the final draft of the EPDP charter scope section.
</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal">I received a few suggested edits from Stephanie and 
<span class="m_1143864745865829759spellcheck_typo">Darcy</span> and did my best to incorporate/address them. The small group has reviewed and agreed this is ready for approval at the 19 July Council meeting.</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal">Thanks to everyone for your contributions to this effort.</p><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal">Regards,</p><p class="MsoNormal">Keith</p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><Updated Scope Section 15 July 2018 -- Consolidated Edits.<span class="m_1143864745865829759spellcheck_typo">docx</span>></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><Updated Scope Section 15 July 2018 -- Consolidated Edits CLEAN.<span class="m_1143864745865829759spellcheck_typo">docx</span>></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">______________________________<wbr>_________________<br>
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