[Gac-gnso-cg] revised version of the slide deck -- still plenty oftime for revisions before our next meeting

[Jonathan Robinson]

Many thanks Mikey for the bedrock of this work.

Also Manal for the careful critique and input.

 

I have given it a "once over" and made a few minor suggested tweaks.

Each is identified by a comment as my change tracking feature appeared to
not work.

Tweaked version is attached.

 

Thinking ahead to our meeting on Sunday:

 

1.       Manal & I need to circle back with Heather and possibly others on
what the scope / agenda of the meeting is.
i.e. is it confined to the work of this group.

2.       In any case, thinking about only the work of this group, slides
1-10 are excellent on a stand-alone basis to describe the work of this
group.
Slide 10 ends with a series of discussion points / questions and that seems
sensible.  The presentation will naturally pause there.

3.       I think I understand that slide 11 is then an the example of our
early thinking and then slide 12 contains examples of current work that
could be subject to process in slide 11.
Correct?

 

Thanks again for the excellent work on this.

 

 

Jonathan

 

From: gac-gnso-cg-bounces at icann.org [mailto:gac-gnso-cg-bounces at icann.org]
On Behalf Of Manal Ismail
Sent: 16 March 2014 14:29
To: Mike O'Connor
Cc: gac-gnso-cgs at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Gac-gnso-cg] revised version of the slide deck -- still plenty
oftime for revisions before our next meeting

 

Thanks Mikey for noting this ..

I do support and appreciate your friendly amendment ..

Kind Regards

--Manal

 

From: Mike O'Connor [mailto:mike at haven2.com] 
Sent: Sunday, March 16, 2014 2:45 PM
To: Manal Ismail
Cc: gac-gnso-cgs at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Gac-gnso-cg] revised version of the slide deck -- still plenty
oftime for revisions before our next meeting

 

hi all,

 

i've rolled all of this conversation up into a new draft of the slides.
there's one remaining thing to note...

 

Manal noticed that "GNSO" doesn't appear in on the title of the slide deck
and added it.  but that title is also the title of our group and "GNSO"
doesn't appear there either. i almost went ahead and changed it in the
Charter before i submitted it, but decided to check with the rest of you.
does everybody consider this a friendly amendment, as i do?  i left Manal's
addition highlighted in red on this version of the deck to remind us to just
quickly dispense with that question on our call.

 

thanks,

 

mikey

 

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