[Gac-gnso-cg] GAC-GNSO Pre-ICANN London Briefing Note ..

[Jonathan Robinson]

Thanks Both,

I agree that Avri provides some useful input but, for the most part, is more
about the work of the group than the communications document that this is.

We're close and so I feel we should be in a position to sign off on this on
Monday.  I have added a couple of comments, mostly in response to your
points.
Manal and I will agree the final document to be sent out.

I think it will then form the foundation for the presentation.

ALL, PLEASE NOTE - Any further input from the group, please provide TODAY.

Jonathan

-----Original Message-----
From: gac-gnso-cg-bounces at icann.org [mailto:gac-gnso-cg-bounces at icann.org]
On Behalf Of Manal Ismail
Sent: 29 May 2014 09:03
To: Avri Doria; gac-gnso-cg at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Gac-gnso-cg] GAC-GNSO Pre-ICANN London Briefing Note ..

Thanks Avri for your feedback and comments ..
I've included my comments in the attached ..
Appreciate other thoughts/comments before we circulate next Mon., Jun.
2nd ..  
Kind Regards
--Manal

-----Original Message-----
From: gac-gnso-cg-bounces at icann.org
[mailto:gac-gnso-cg-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Avri Doria
Sent: Tuesday, May 27, 2014 5:18 PM
To: gac-gnso-cg at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Gac-gnso-cg] GAC-GNSO Pre-ICANN London Briefing Note ..

Hi,

I have reviewed it and I think it was clear and informative.

I made some notes, but they are picky and may not actually affect the
document much at all and may be more about the work being described.

avri


On 26-May-14 01:45, Manal Ismail wrote:
> Dear All ..
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> 
> As we have agreed to share with our constituencies, ahead of London 
> meeting, a briefing note describing our work progress and setting 
> expectations for London, please find attached a proposed briefing 
> prepared by Jonathan and myself ..
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> We look forward to receiving your comments/suggestions ..
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> 
> Avri (as a fresh eye) and Mark (having been away for some time),
> 
> It would be helpful if you can, of course in addition to any other 
> comments you may have, if you can let us know whether the briefing is 
> clear, provides the necessary information and helps in understanding 
> the work of the group ..
> 
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> 
> We suggest to conclude the briefing note next Friday, May 30^th , and 
> target to have it distributed next week, on Monday, Jun 2^nd ..
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> Kind Regards
> 
> --Manal
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