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<p>I agree</p>
<p>Wolf-Ulrich<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Am 14.10.2019 um 20:01 schrieb McAuley,
David via Gnso-bylaws-dt:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">What Steve suggests about ending the
sentence after ‘proposed Petition’ makes sense to me.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">David<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">David McAuley<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Sr International Policy & Business
Development Manager<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Verisign Inc.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">703-948-4154<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Gnso-bylaws-dt
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gnso-bylaws-dt-bounces@icann.org"><gnso-bylaws-dt-bounces@icann.org></a>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Steve DelBianco<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, October 14, 2019 1:55 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Heather Forrest <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:haforrestesq@gmail.com"><haforrestesq@gmail.com></a>;
Ariel Liang <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:ariel.liang@icann.org"><ariel.liang@icann.org></a>; Julie Hedlund
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:julie.hedlund@icann.org"><julie.hedlund@icann.org></a>; <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-bylaws-dt@icann.org">gnso-bylaws-dt@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] [Gnso-bylaws-dt] URGENT NEXT
STEPS to finalising our work<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Mine was Section 3.3 guideline on removing
ALL directors ( <a
href="https://drive.google.com/open?id=1fSv0ELSGLmaABoz2_DKXHRsHrG-MyihPR1ePpbmamDU"
moz-do-not-send="true"><span
style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">https://drive.google.com/open?id=1fSv0ELSGLmaABoz2_DKXHRsHrG-MyihPR1ePpbmamDU</span></a><span
style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">
</span> )<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">I found two
substantive concerns, which isn’t surprising since we just
completed the drafting on this section.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">On page 7 and on page 11 we say:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in">“…the GNSO Council
will be deemed to have rejected the proposed Petition and the
matter will be considered closed.”<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I am not sure the petition matter is closed
if every other Decisional Participant supports removal.
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<p class="MsoNormal">Perhaps we drop everything after "proposed
Petition" in this sentence.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I found a few typos/repeated phrases, and
noted those in comments.<span style="font-size:12.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black">We have reached the
end of our work plan! There are 2 things
immediately left to do (we'll circle back
to clean up the last item, the Joint
Consultation Guidelines with ccNSO, once
our looming deadline to Council is met).
To meet Council's document deadline, both
tasks must be done before Monday, 14
October:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b><span
style="color:red">FIRST: FINALIZE 3.1,
3.2 and 3.3 - TO COMPLETE BY THIS
SUNDAY, 6 OCTOBER</span></b><span
style="color:#500050"> </span><span
style="color:black">in your time zone:
Ariel has worked diligently to clean up
these documents following our call, and I
have reviewed her edits and tinkered a bit
further. Please can all DT members review
these, with particular attention to</span><span
style="color:#500050">:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Symbol">·</span><span
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New Roman",serif">
</span>3.2 - the revisions to 4.2.3 (<b>SO/AC
Director Removal Petition Review and
Certification of Completeness</b>): Ariel
has tidied up, and you will see I have also
further added the words 'Certification of
Completeness' in the heading of this section
and some plain-English introductory words in
the introduction at the bottom of page 1 to
more clearly distinguish between
Certification of Completeness by Council
leadership; Acceptance of the Petition by
Vote of Relevant House; and Approval of
Petition by entire Council. <span
style="color:black">The same language has
been ported to 2.2/2.3, 3.1, and 3.3 as
well.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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New Roman",serif">
</span>3.3 - the revisions to 4.2.4 (<b>GNSO
Community Feedback on Certified Board
Recall Petition) </b>to address David's
comment to specify the help from staff to
compile, and if time permits, summarise, any
comments received through Community
Feedback.<span style="color:black"> The same
language has been ported to other relevant
sections in 1.3/1.4, 2.2/2.3, 3.1, 3.2,
and 3.3 (as noted in Ariel’s response to
David).</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="color:red">SECOND: REVIEW OF
FULL PACKAGE - TO COMPLETE BY NEXT
FRIDAY, 11 OCTOBER</span></b> in your
time zone: Ariel has added a table at the
top of our work plan to set out each
Guideline/Template we have developed.
WORKPLAN found here (<a
href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yeydtqli8UWOrrvChIf9EMprGxo0pOr5lcadM-n0PnY/edit?usp=sharing"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yeydtqli8UWOrrvChIf9EMprGxo0pOr5lcadM-n0PnY/edit?usp=sharing</a>).
I have randomly nominated an active DT
member to each Guideline. If you are
completely dissatisfied with your
allocated document, please convince
another DT member to swap with you (bear
with me please, as we don't have too much
time to rock-paper-scissors over who gets
what). I'm happy to take on 2 reviews to
complete the list unless a DT member who
was not allocated a doc wants to take on a
review. Starting from next Monday morning,
7 October (please wait until Monday
morning so Julie, Ariel and I can ensure
that 3.1, 3.2 and 3.3 are ready and port
any relevant changes across to the other
docs) please review your allocated
document next week. When your review is
complete, indicate so in the workplan
table by typing 'yes' or 'complete' into
the relevant box in the chart. Ariel has
diligently ported backwards to earlier
documents our learnings and decisions from
the more recent documents, but we're all
more experienced now, and this final
review may catch further things we didn't
think about earlier in the year. If you
find any issues of concern in your review,
please raise them ASAP on the DT list,
making very clear which document you're
referring to and what the problem is.<span
style="color:#500050"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="color:black">Very best wishes
to all,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="color:black">Heather</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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