[Gnso-dmpm-wg] [Dmpm] Re: DMPM Agenda - 14 July 2015 @ 20:00 UTC

[Janvier Noulaye]

Dear Dmpm members,
I apologize for my absence, I can't attend the meeting this evening, I'd
still have a couple of works to complete at the university at that time.
Nevertheless I have carefully read the Initial report
(DMPM_InitialReport_v0.5.pdf), and I'm happy with all the content. Please
see below my comments, and if you don't mind, do take it into account
during the meeting.

Page 10: to move section 4: Members of the Working Group, to put it just
before the Conclusion.
The column of Meetings Attended; This metric is subjective, because one can
participate 100% without contributing 1% , and we can have someone with 10%
of participation with more than 50% of valuable contributions.
Because of this subjective behaviour of this metric, I suggest to remove
this column.

Page 30: inside the table, we read: Name of WG Chair
I suggest to write: Name of WG Chair/co-Chair

Page 38:  the email address: Policy-staff at icann.org
I think the Chair of the WG should be involved  into this mail contact, not
only the Staff, unless it's said so into the Charter.  I suggest something
else like:  Policy-????@icann.org  (with ???? to determine)

page 39: Annex B
It is written: This tool should be used together with the metrics request
template found in the next annex
To write: This tool should be used together with the metrics request form
found in the next annex

Page 40:  Metrics Request Decision Tree
Before the square of the end of the tree we have: Construct metrics for WG
use & Final Report
This stands as two actions, I suggest to separate them, see attached the
diagram on that section.

Have a nice and productive  meeting.
Warm regards,

/Janvier Ngnoulaye, PhD
Lecturer in ICT
University of Yaounde 1
Yaounde - Cameroon


2015-07-14 4:52 GMT+01:00 Berry Cobb <mail at berrycobb.com>:

> WG Members,
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> Below is the agenda for Tuesday’s meeting.   Attached is the next version
> of the Initial Report that we will review changes made during the call.
> After which, the WG is invited to make any suggested edits as we near
> submission for public comment.
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> *Proposed Agenda – Data and Metrics for Policy Making - 14 July 2015 @
> 20:00 UTC*
>
>    1. Roll Call / Statements of Interest
>    2. Review draft Initial Report/recommendations
>    3. Review actions and confirm next meeting
>
> ***Note, these links are to the Kavi tool.  Please let us know if you do
> not have access.
>
> Initial Report (.docx):
> https://icann.kavi.com/kws/groups/DMPM/download.php/106/DMPM_InitialReport_v0.5.docx
>
>
> Initial Report (.pdf):
> https://icann.kavi.com/kws/groups/DMPM/download.php/107/DMPM_InitialReport_v0.5.pdf
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>
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> Thank you.  B
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> Berry A. Cobb
>
> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers
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> 720.839.5735
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> mail at berrycobb.com
>
> @berrycobb
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