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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Berry & Colleagues<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I apologize for not being able to submit suggested edits before the deadline <b><span style='color:red'>23:59 UTC on 20 July</span></b> due to other commitments. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I attach a reline version with my suggested edits and comments for consideration. I hope they make sense or would be happy to explain further during our call. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>In addition, there are a number of proposed commendations that read: “The WG directs staff to...” update certain PDP guidelines, manual, templates, etc. Question to Berry: does the non-PDP DMPM WG or any other PDP WG have the mandate to <u>direct</u> staff to do so or should the direction come from the GNSO or the ICANN Board?<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Pam <span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Berry Cobb [<a href="mailto:mail@berrycobb.com">mailto:mail@berrycobb.com</a>] <br><b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 15, 2015 7:40 AM<br><b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:dmpm@icann.kavi.com">dmpm@icann.kavi.com</a>; <a href="mailto:gnso-dmpm-wg@icann.org">gnso-dmpm-wg@icann.org</a><br><b>Subject:</b> [Dmpm] v0.6 of DMPM Inital Report<br><b>Importance:</b> High<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>WG Members,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Please find attached the latest draft of the Initial Report. I included both the redline and clean version of the report. Please make any suggested changes to the <b><u>CLEAN</u></b> version, as the redline is only attached for reference. Track changes are enabled and staff will combine submissions by the group into an v0.7 which will act as the master version.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>If possible, please submit any suggested changes by <b><span style='color:red'>23:59 UTC on 20 July</span></b>. We will review the next version at our call scheduled for 21 July at 20:00 UTC. Hopefully, we can submit this for public comment shortly thereafter.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>In regards to review, please provide input on the entire document. However, please pay most attention to:<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>1.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>Section 5 that contains the group’s draft recommendations<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>2.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>Section 6 – Conclusions and Next Steps<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>3.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>Annex A – WG Charter Template – suggested changes highlighted in <span style='color:red'>RED</span> text<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>4.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>Annex B – Metrics Decision Tree – you will not be able to edit this diagram, but add side comments on any suggested changes and staff can update the Visio diagram as required<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>5.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>Annex C – Metrics Request Form<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>6.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>Any side comments that remain in the clean version<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>We appreciate the groups assistance with this next version of the report and look forward to submitting it for public comment in the near term.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Thank you. B<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Berry Cobb<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>720.839.5735<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><a href="mailto:mail@berrycobb.com">mail@berrycobb.com</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>@berrycobb<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>