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<p class="MsoNormal"><a name="_MailEndCompose"><span style="color:#1F497D">Dear WG Members,<o:p></o:p></span></a></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Attached are my proposed redline revisions/comments, out through page 39.&nbsp; I look forward to discussing these with the group.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Tony<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:1.0pt"><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:black">Tony Onorato, Esq./CIPP(US)<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:2.0pt"><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;color:black">FisherBroyles, LLP<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Berry Cobb [mailto:mail@berrycobb.com] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, July 14, 2015 5:40 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> dmpm@icann.kavi.com; gnso-dmpm-wg@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Dmpm] v0.6 of DMPM Inital Report<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">WG Members,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Please find attached the latest draft of the Initial Report.&nbsp; I included both the redline and clean version of the report.&nbsp; Please make any suggested changes to the
<b><u>CLEAN</u></b> version, as the redline is only attached for reference.&nbsp; Track changes are enabled and staff will combine submissions by the group into an v0.7 which will act as the master version.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">If possible, please submit any suggested changes by <b><span style="color:red">23:59 UTC on 20 July</span></b>.&nbsp; We will review the next version at our call scheduled for 21 July at 20:00 UTC.&nbsp; Hopefully, we can submit this for public comment
 shortly thereafter.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">In regards to review, please provide input on the entire document.&nbsp; However, please pay most attention to:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="mso-list:Ignore">1.<span style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]>Section 5 that contains the group&#8217;s draft recommendations<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="mso-list:Ignore">2.<span style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]>Section 6 &#8211; Conclusions and Next Steps<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="mso-list:Ignore">3.<span style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]>Annex A &#8211; WG Charter Template &#8211; suggested changes highlighted in
<span style="color:red">RED</span> text<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="mso-list:Ignore">4.<span style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]>Annex B &#8211; Metrics Decision Tree &#8211; you will not be able to edit this diagram, but add side comments on any suggested changes and staff can update the Visio diagram as required<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="mso-list:Ignore">5.<span style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]>Annex C &#8211; Metrics Request Form<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="mso-list:Ignore">6.<span style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span><![endif]>Any side comments that remain in the clean version<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">We appreciate the groups assistance with this next version of the report and look forward to submitting it for public comment in the near term.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you.&nbsp; B<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Berry Cobb<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names &amp; Numbers (ICANN)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">720.839.5735<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><a href="mailto:mail@berrycobb.com">mail@berrycobb.com</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">@berrycobb<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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