[Gnso-epdp-team] Fwd: Initial Report - final version + redline

[STROUNGI Melina]

Many thanks also from my side. I appreciate it was a difficult and time consuming task and thank you for the patience and efforts to find a middle ground.

Without wanting to delay the process, I have to agree with Brian’s remark that the way Preliminary Rec #1 is phrased is misleading. As it is at a prominent place at the beginning of the document and it states conclusively that no changes are recommended it may give the wrong impression to the reader.

I believe most of us would feel more comfortable if it was slightly rephrased to capture that “despite some groups believing that such changes are needed, no consensus was received on this point and thus no changes have been made, but we welcome public comments on this point”.

I’m sorry; I know it must be frustrating as we want to publish this as soon as possible, but it is important to do it right. We have all devoted valuable time in the process and it is important that the text reflects this effort and the different voices heard.

Best regards,
Melina

From: Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces at icann.org> On Behalf Of Kapin, Laureen via Gnso-epdp-team
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Subject: [Gnso-epdp-team] Fwd: Initial Report - final version + redline

Many thanks and appreciation to our excellent staff. I know that it was quite challenging to synthesize and organize our input for this closing lap of the initial report. I also realize that this work must have gobbled up weekend and holiday time.  I’m sure I speak for the entire team when I acknowledge how fortunate we are to have the support of such dedicated and skilled colleagues.

Hoping you all get some well deserved time off!
  Sent via phone.
  Please excuse typos and/or
  unintended auto-correct
  outcomes.

Laureen Kapin
Federal Trade Commission






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From: Caitlin Tubergen via Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team at icann.org<mailto:gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>>
Date: June 2, 2021 at 6:03:00 PM PDT
To: gnso-epdp-team at icann.org<mailto:gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>
Subject: [Gnso-epdp-team] Initial Report - final version + redline
Dear EPDP Team,

As Keith noted earlier, Leadership and the Staff Support Team have considered the input from our last meeting as well as suggested edits received via the feedback form and via the list and updated the Initial Report accordingly. The Support Staff Team has submitted the Initial Report to the ICANN org internal team for publication.

Attached, you will find the final Initial Report as well as the redline version where you can see all of the changes.

Best regards,

Berry, Marika, and Caitlin
<EPDP Phase 2A - Initial Report FINAL - 2 June 2021.pdf>
<EPDP Phase 2A - Initial Report FINAL - Redline - updated 2 June 2021.pdf>
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