[Gnso-epdp-team] Fwd: Initial Report - final version + redline
Alan Greenberg
alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca
Thu Jun 3 15:11:15 UTC 2021
On behalf of the ALAC, I strongly support the comments made by Melina and Jan.
Alan
At 2021-06-03 08:16 AM, Jan Janssen via Gnso-epdp-team wrote:
>All,
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>I can only second that. I very much appreciate
>the time and efforts you put into this and the
>wish to speed up the process as much as
>possible. However, that should not be a reason
>to rush into the public comment period with an
>initial report that contains parts that are
>unacceptable to working group members. If we
>proceed on this basis, it would only complicate
>the dynamic within the working group and make
>the public comments less orderly and more difficult to manage.
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>What are the consequences of a small delay
>compared to the impact of publishing a report
>that we know is unacceptable to WG members? Why
>has todayâs meeting been cancelled, while it
>could have been used to discuss these edits?
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>With respect to the way in which Preliminary Rec
>#1 is written, the draft Initial Report does not
>accurately reflect the âlevel of consensus for
>the recommendations presented in the Initial
>Reportâ, as required by Section 11 of the PDP
>Manual. This (and the other issues) must be
>sorted out before the Initial Report is published for public comments.
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>Best regards,
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>From: Gnso-epdp-team
><gnso-epdp-team-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of
>STROUNGI Melina via Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>
>Reply to: STROUNGI Melina <Melina.STROUNGI at ec.europa.eu>
>Date: Thursday, 3 June 2021 at 10:45
>To: "Kapin, Laureen" <LKAPIN at ftc.gov>, Caitlin
>Tubergen <caitlin.tubergen at icann.org>, Marika
>Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>, Berry Cobb <Berry.Cobb at icann.org>
>Cc: EPDP <gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>
>Subject: Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Fwd: Initial Report - final version + redline
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>Many thanks also from my side. I appreciate it
>was a difficult and time consuming task and
>thank you for the patience and efforts to find a middle ground.
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>Without wanting to delay the process, I have to
>agree with Brianâs remark that the way
>Preliminary Rec #1 is phrased is misleading. As
>it is at a prominent place at the beginning of
>the document and it states conclusively that no
>changes are recommended it may give the wrong impression to the reader.
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>I believe most of us would feel more comfortable
>if it was slightly rephrased to capture that
>âdespite some groups believing that such
>changes are needed, no consensus was received on
>this point and thus no changes have been made,
>but we welcome public comments on this pointâ.
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>Iâm sorry; I know it must be frustrating as we
>want to publish this as soon as possible, but it
>is important to do it right. We have all devoted
>valuable time in the process and it is important
>that the text reflects this effort and the different voices heard.
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>Best regards,
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>Melina
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>From: Gnso-epdp-team
><gnso-epdp-team-bounces at icann.org> On Behalf Of
>Kapin, Laureen via Gnso-epdp-team
>Sent: Thursday, June 3, 2021 5:35 AM
>To: Caitlin Tubergen
><caitlin.tubergen at icann.org>; Marika Konings
><marika.konings at icann.org>; Berry Cobb <Berry.Cobb at icann.org>
>Cc: gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>
>Subject: [Gnso-epdp-team] Fwd: Initial Report - final version + redline
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>Many thanks and appreciation to our excellent
>staff. I know that it was quite challenging to
>synthesize and organize our input for this
>closing lap of the initial report. I also
>realize that this work must have gobbled up
>weekend and holiday time. Iâm sure I speak
>for the entire team when I acknowledge how
>fortunate we are to have the support of such
>dedicated and skilled colleagues.
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>Hoping you all get some well deserved time off!
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> Sent via phone.
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> Please excuse typos and/or
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> unintended auto-correct
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> outcomes.
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>Laureen Kapin
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>Federal Trade Commission
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>Begin forwarded message:
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>From: Caitlin Tubergen via Gnso-epdp-team
><<mailto:gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>
>Date: June 2, 2021 at 6:03:00 PM PDT
>To: <mailto:gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>gnso-epdp-team at icann.org
>Subject: [Gnso-epdp-team] Initial Report - final version + redline
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>Dear EPDP Team,
>
>As Keith noted earlier, Leadership and the Staff
>Support Team have considered the input from our
>last meeting as well as suggested edits received
>via the feedback form and via the list and
>updated the Initial Report accordingly. The
>Support Staff Team has submitted the Initial
>Report to the ICANN org internal team for publication.
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>Attached, you will find the final Initial Report
>as well as the redline version where you can see all of the changes.
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>Best regards,
>
>Berry, Marika, and Caitlin
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><EPDP Phase 2A - Initial Report FINAL - 2 June 2021.pdf>
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><EPDP Phase 2A - Initial Report FINAL - Redline - updated 2 June 2021.pdf>
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