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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">I also think most of these are good edits, and greatly improve the clarity of the temp spec. Moreover they are quite consistent with Amr’s critique of 4.4.2.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">There is one part I am not sure of, however. Under 4.4.8 I do not know what is meant by “tailored mechanisms designed to protect intellectual property interests…” At the very least I think we
want to protect intellectual property rights, not “interests.” <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Gnso-epdp-team [mailto:gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>James M. Bladel<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, September 5, 2018 7:43 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-epdp-team@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-epdp-team] RrSG edits -- Section 4.4<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue",serif">ePDP Team –
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue",serif">In preparation for tomorrow’s call, please find attached a redline PDF of our edits to Section 4.4 of the Temp Spec, along with a slide/PDF with “clean” language for Kurt & Staff. Matt, Theo
and I will walk through these edits, along with our rationale.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue",serif">Look forward to our discussion tomorrow.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue",serif">Thanks—<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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J.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica Neue Light",serif;color:#00B050">James Bladel<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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