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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Marika,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thanks for sending the updated language…it will be added to the pile
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">One note though I immediately saw, can you please add the RrSG to the following text:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">“As such, the NCSG, ISPCP and RySG do not support not redacting this information.”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Matt <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, November 14, 2018 at 12:53 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>"gnso-epdp-team@icann.org" <gnso-epdp-team@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Gnso-epdp-team] Updated data redaction language<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear All,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Following yesterday’s discussion, please find attached the updated proposed language for inclusion in the Initial Report in relation to data redaction. Note that this version includes input from Margie and
Benedict in relation to the action item from yesterday’s EPDP Team meeting (“<span style="color:black">Margie to provide language that describes the organizations supporting not redacting the “organization” field. Benedict to provide language to explain systemic
risk of not publishing organization field.”). If you have any further comments and/or proposed edits, please share these with the list as soon as possible.</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Caitlin, Berry and Marika</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Marika Konings</span></i></b><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) </span></i><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Email: <a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org">marika.konings@icann.org</a> </span></i><o:p></o:p></p>
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