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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear EPDP Team,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please find hereby the ‘hopefully almost final’ version of the Initial Report for your review:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Redline:
<a href="https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/15fRRL_ORRkspHI9HVNP3v3Zrpz-WBlAx/view?usp=sharing">
https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/15fRRL_ORRkspHI9HVNP3v3Zrpz-WBlAx/view?usp=sharing</a>
<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Clean:
<a href="https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/1UOJZmbj99FjTRheqH2K-HKwp_Xxl31Nh/view?usp=sharing">
https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/1UOJZmbj99FjTRheqH2K-HKwp_Xxl31Nh/view?usp=sharing</a>
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">As you will see, with the inclusion of the data element workbooks and the preliminary recommendations & questions in the executive summary, the report has become pretty lengthy (127 pages). To facilitate review
 by the community, you could consider making the report downloadable in separate parts, for example, by having the executive summary available for separate download and/or making the data element workbooks a separate download.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">As you review this latest version, please focus your input on any aspects that need to be updated as they are either insufficiently clear for the reader, incorrect or not reflecting accurately who is in support
 of a certain position. Please try to avoid reopening issues that have already been extensively discussed (you may consider starting a separate list of items that the EPDP Team should turn its attention to after the Initial Report has been published?). We hope
 that this version addresses all comments submitted to date and issues recently discussed, but if we’ve missed something, please also add this to the google doc comment form:
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SoNTnvvadNQ8nX_-OxN4mtsd-gfLNxT54GXSXyGQwEQ/edit?ts=5bead3ba">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SoNTnvvadNQ8nX_-OxN4mtsd-gfLNxT54GXSXyGQwEQ/edit?ts=5bead3ba</a>.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">As you add your comments to the google doc form, please be specific about which change you are proposing. Also, as you refer to the line number, please make clear whether this concerns the redline or clean
 version. Please submit your comments in the google doc table (<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SoNTnvvadNQ8nX_-OxN4mtsd-gfLNxT54GXSXyGQwEQ/edit?ts=5bead3ba">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SoNTnvvadNQ8nX_-OxN4mtsd-gfLNxT54GXSXyGQwEQ/edit?ts=5bead3ba</a>)
 by Sunday 18 November, end of day, at the latest.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Caitlin, Berry and Marika<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Marika Konings</span></i></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) </span></i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Email: <a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"><span style="color:#0563C1">marika.konings@icann.org</span></a>  </span></i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO</span></i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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