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<p style="margin-top:0;margin-bottom:0">All, I have been going through the Exec Summary of the interim report and have found some issues. Most of these are grammar or copy editing fixes that I hope we can accept without controversy. One of them has a substantive
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<p style="margin: 0px; font: 12px Helvetica;">Footnote 2, page 4: “the EPDP Team anticipates taking a formal consensus call..” </p>
<p style="margin: 0px; font: 12px Helvetica;">Shouldn’t this be “WILL take a formal consensus call…” To say "anticipates" sounds like we might not do so if it’s not convenient. We are required to take a consensus call</p>
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<p style="margin: 0px; font: 12px Helvetica;">Line 150-151: The wording of Preliminary Rec 2 is awkward and ungrammatical.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> It now reads:</span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0px; font: 12px Helvetica;">“The EPDP Team commits to develop and coordinate policy in the system for standardized access to non-public registration data portion of this EPDP regarding lawful access for legitimate third-party interests regarding
abuse or intellectual property to data identified herein that is already collected.” This should be changed to:</p>
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<p style="margin: 0px; font: 12px Helvetica;">“The EPDP Team commits to develop and coordinate policy for disclosure of non-public registration data to third parties with legitimate interests.”</p>
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<p style="margin: 0px; font: 12px Helvetica;">Page 6, footnote 3. Delete. I thought we had agreed that after agreeing on Preliminary Agreement #3 that new policies on accuracy were out of scope.</p>
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<p style="margin: 0px; font: 12px Helvetica;">Page 6, footnote 4. This can be deleted, as the same text is included later on in page 7, lines 170-172</p>
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