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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">Thank you Amr, It is not a matter of objection, I just think that taking into consideration previous communications with the EDPB it would be better to just state what is in the mission statement
and all cases I don't suppose such a change will disturb anyone. Please find below my suggestion
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">"ICANN is a global non-governmental non-profit organization responsible<span style="background:white"> for ensuring the stable and secure operation of the Internet's unique identifier systems as described
in its mission"<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;background:white">Best<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;background:white">Hadia<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Amr Elsadr [mailto:aelsadr@icannpolicy.ninja]
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 05, 2018 3:57 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Stephanie Perrin; gnso-epdp-team@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] draft EDPB<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Hadia,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Responses in-line:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Dec 5, 2018, at 1:38 PM, Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi <<a href="mailto:Hadia@tra.gov.eg">Hadia@tra.gov.eg</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Sorry a correction to the email that I sent in a rush below</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Dear Stephanie,<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Thank you and all who have contributed to the EDPB draft letter. However I do not agree with the statement in the first paragraph that says<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">" ICANN is a global non-governmental non-profit organization responsible for ensuring the stable and secure operation of the Internet's system of
unique identifiers, i.e., domain names and IP addresses." <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">The above statement attempts to define ICANN's mission – which is indeed out of our scope - and strongly contradicts with ICANN's note to the EDPB
on May 5 2018 and contradicts with the letter sent on July 5 from EDPB to Goran Marby in which the EDPB acknowledges that ICANN's mandate goes beyond ensuring the stable and secure operation of the Internet's system of unique identifier. To remind you the
letter of July 5 from EDPB said <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">" in its letter of 10 may 2018, ICANN makes several references to ICANN's Bylaws to underline that ICANN's mission with respect to domain names is
not limited to ensuring the stable and secure operation of the internet unique identifiers system (technical stability). The EDPB has taken note of ICANN's Bylaws, which require ICANN, in carrying out its mandate …”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The original language seems fine to me. It’s consistent with the bylaws, and if it helps at all, it doesn’t say that ICANN’s mission is limited to anything. It just states that ICANN is responsible for ensuring the stable and secure operation
of the Internet’s system of unique identifiers. Surely, this is something that isn’t worth objecting to?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">I also do not agree with the statement in the draft letter that says "<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>the ICANN Board adopted a Temporary
Specification for gTLD Registration Data (“Temporary Specification”), which is intended to bring the domain name ecosystem into GDPR compliance"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">The aforementioned intention of the temporary specification is too broad, the temporary specification is intended to ensure that the <span style="color:#333333;background:white">Personal
Data that is Processed by certain participants in the </span>gTLD<span style="color:#333333;background:white"> domain name ecosystem</span><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>is in compliance with the GDPR, we are certainly not working on the whole
domain name ecosystem nor is it within our mandate.<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Agree that the original language is not correct. It would be best to be more accurate and specific on this. We wouldn’t want to convey a wrong impression of what the EPDP Team was chartered to do.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Amr<o:p></o:p></p>
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