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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Dear All,</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">As requested, here comments on the draft final report from the BC and IPC on
<b>Recommendation 1</b>:</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Purpose 1: </span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">In lieu of the “Benefits and Responsibilities” language, we propose a slight modification by adding the word “maintenance” as
follows:</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"> To ensure that a Registered Name Holder may exercise its rights in the use<span style="background:yellow">, maintenance</span>, and disposition of the Registered Name …”</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Purpose 2: </span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">The report should include the agreement from Toronto similar to what is in Footnote 25 that:</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"> <span style="background:yellow">“Purpose 2 is a placeholder pending further work on the issue of access in Phase 2 of this EPDP, and will be revisited once this Phase 2 work has
been completed.”</span></span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Line 684:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"> The yellow text should be replaced with actual recommendation, as follows:</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;background:yellow">“The EPDP commits to considering in Phase 2 of this EPDP whether separate purposes should be included for ICANN ORG research and threat response in furtherance of ICANN’s mission, and for the
ICANN Accuracy Reporting System (ARS) to continue to be published</span><span style="color:black">.”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Finally, Footnote 25 is a statement that should not be buried in a footnote, but included in the body of the report.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">All the best,</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Margie</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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